Review Detail of David_Drake in DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Mediocre is the best I can describe it. Nothing differs from canon as it is a slight rehash of those events with similar outcomes. My main issue is how the author wrote this. The MC's memories are faulty at the most convenient of times. Where ROB has taken his long term memory and butchered it until the plot calls for it to become relevant. So we get arcs where the MC just 'remembers' what the big secret is through some hard core plot armor leading the way. So we are left in the dark concerning his actions until he rediscovers his 'missing' memory, I mean plot points where he no longer stumbles in the dark. Then we have the romantic interest who is 'raven', but it doesn't develop into anything as of c119. Where our MC will proceed to go full edgy mode with her wanting to tag along. However, this could've been avoided with a simple explanation of his future knowledge that would've prevented this disaster. But, I forgot the MC got some brain issues as the author loves his soap opera. Also did I forget that foreshadowing of deathstroke is way to obvious? Its almost as if the author wants the MC to join the villains at this stage. Not even trying to hide it as a an igneous alternative. Since we had over 20chps of batman going over this 'betrayal' plan in great detail. In other words, I think this review doesn't deserve a spoiler as everything written is too blatant to be left wondering of how the plot would unfold.