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DotComplex
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5 for writing quality and stability of updates, 3 for everything else.....its getting boring, like I know it's supposed to be a slow fic and I respect that but with locked memories trope + powers too dangerous to actually be used it just kinda feels like the MC is an inferior batman.....literally a chipmunk with magic could wipe the floor with him and it's been a 100 chapters. It would've been fine if the slice of life moments in between were good but the best joke so far has been Oliver Queen's mustache so this.....this just not it. I'd honestly rather you give this up and maybe work on the twilight: venom fic or something, at least that seems interesting.

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

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David_Drake
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Don't forget how his memories are faulty at the most convenient of times. Where ROB has taken his long term memory and butchered it until the plot calls for it to become relevant. So we get arcs where the MC just 'remembers' what the big secret is through some hard core plot armor leading the way. So we are left in the dark of his actions until he rediscovers the original plot and no longer needs to fumble in the dark.