EzioAuditore_1
I honestly don't know what to suggest, but I can say that the story is going very well and that I really trust his judgment, so far he hasn't made any mistakes... But pay attention, who knows, maybe you'll do something and we'll need to grab our pitchforks to give you some common sense... Stopping to think about it now, is there no hero or villain who is poorly followed at this point in the chronology that the MC could "adopt" and take with him as a puppy? a "criminal duo" that is not being controlled by him sometimes helps.. thx for chap
Give the guy his own zanpakuto. Don't just give him shikai and bankai. Make the guy overcome his zanpakuto spirit. I'm telling you this because the guy needs friends or else he'll go crazy. And in term of story development,.honestly guy should just leave this world and enter the young justice universe as the story can be developed further from there.
Hello, don't give him a travel ticket but give him a portal device that will give him a round trip but take him to a dark world where he sees the evil of the worlds and then decides his path and becomes what he wants.Then he should decide his path and become in a way that makes his will stronger. If he wants to be a villain, he must be a villain with a purpose, and not be an aimless murderous fool like the Joker, and not like the Anti-Monitor who only wants destruction.And teach him about building an organization, and his organization should be with summons and those infected by the virus, not some outsider over whom he has no complete control.Give him some scientists and make a link between him and the army and infect some generals so that he doesn't face any special problem, it's good to have an organization through energy because it's less trouble than organizations that work on geneticsI can't think of anything special right now until the next chapter👋.
After coming out league of shadows will definitely want to kill him so if he start a company or something like this he will get attack a lot and unnecessary problem will follow unless he changes his face I suggest building a company when he becomes strong enough and smart enough and what he need now completes his template progress so he needs to fight a lot for this I suggest he temporarily go back Gotham and tell batman he run away and now he unlocked his power he wants to be hero and when he becomes a fake hero he fights with a lot of strong enemy or he join young justice or Teen titan i don't know or travel to young justice universe and Fool batman there and be a fake hero or send him into a lawless world so he can just kill any body he wants like Naruto or one piece
I just don't understand the actions of the League of Assassins in this story. They are the ones who forcefully brought him with them and now they constantly try to kill him. Why did they even bring him in the first place? Some far off ancestry is involved as alluded in a past chapter since his parents were druggies.
I reccomend doing something with queen Bee. She has a country, is rarely talked about in fics so it would feel fresh, new and interesting, and she is a part of the light organization, so you could write that she met mc and then he used her to gain power. Maybe she tried to control him, but then he was like, nah, Imma do my own thing.