is his memory coming back ?

the mc getting his love for Wanda from a simulation is really no-no for me, honestly. Also, I really don't like the shounen type of plot anymore where mc would see someone. He loves getting killed and getting overpowered. It seems worse with the fact that mc doesn't really love her . All it stems from a stupid simulation . I'm gonna try out a few more chapters before giving it up, probably . Nonetheless ,thanks for the chapter.

I don't understand what happened to your mc future sense ? Was that idea completely scrapped?

how disappointing. Shinobi aren't samurai who'll respect honours . Their shtick is to kill a opponent with the minimum effort.

meh , the story is already filled with too many conveniences. For example, why would dumbledore come to get a student or why would he even obersve an ordinary muggle.The fact that mc called him by name and dumbledore didn't even call him out is probably the convenient fact here

honestly, unnecessary suspense . Just fking tell her what he's doing ?

I'm not honestly sure what I just read. It was extremely confusing . What are the circumstances that don't allow mc to help Danny. Why does the mc want to stall the merchants' plan or whatever is his even. Pretty boring

lol. not sure where this sense of fight is even coming from . at the stage madara is , he should be folding the witcher in half. I'd be disappointed if the author tries to nerf the shinobi

translation is actually quite good. But the biggest problem of the story is its narration style. it just tells the events what's happening. Dialogues are a very small part of the story.

lol, what is this ? Medieval times equality pandering ? Only handful of women were capable of becoming knight that's extremely extremely small number

this was supposed to be basketball fanfic why the heck there is qi here

meh, the guy seems like a simp. Doesn't even provide a good reason to make him s puppet honestly and pretty much abandoned his humanity.

how the hell would Laura know Morse code, and why would your mc know know that Laura knows morse code.

lol. Instant master is incredibly op. If this is going to be op story , it should be mentioned in the story honestly.

meh, fairy tail could've been an incredible story if the author didn't have so much fan service and he pretty much overused power of friendship plot. Every time anyone from main casts were in danger, they just got sudden power ups . It undermined lots of character growth for me . Well, that's my opinion. If you want ti write a fanfic , go for it.

These short chapters is incredibly frustrating. At the rate this arc is going ,it will take 20 chapters to.finish the arc

nah I hate novels to my core where mc is slave to the system. This type of novel depends on the system to drive the plot or progression of the story which makes every aspect of the mc very bland.

kreacher *

no need for harem .Story has good pace, and having a harem would destroy that

I'm getting confused and honestly a little bit disappointed with your mc. The story is quite good, but the way your mc acted feels like a third-rate villain . I'm not saying him to be a hero but for an earthling who's just transmigratted into this body to be this unhinged , honestly little bit off-putting