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The story is just now jumping from a point to another point and all this unnecessary mysterious reason like from the beginning we thought he's a rob but he wasn't completely, I don't know what he's cooking but all I care is about the DC story so I hope the story returns to that or MC can leave and go for another earth in dc like earth prime or earth 2. Thanks for the chapter.
that is true that I said MC was going to teach him a few things but I'm still thinking what to do so I changed my mind
no, see they will have a master and disciple relationship, when i said in my last comment that i won't go all master and student was that i won't make the whole cyberpunk world story about MC teaching David
hehe don't worry i won't go all teacher and student and it won't be the whole story for the cyberpunk world, i just think it's a good idea to have MC teach a few things to David and maybe David see him mentor figure
What?? If you mean the your other comment then yes, I deleted because I didn't say what I was thinking right so I deleted and write a new comment
i actually never thought about Edward teaching someone and have a student, my plan for David was something else but this seems really good, I need some time to think how I'm going to do it. thanks for your idea
well MC suit is because he doesn't want to get know, later he's going to kill a lot of people but the thing is he also wants to enjoy and look around the cyberpunk world so he hides himself so later he can walk freely on the street and enjoy that city
yeah but i already give MC the normality skill, if a god doesn't know to look for there no way that god find the MC so there no danger, also people in that world come back to life with the help of the technology(sort of) so if that god doesn't go and look for MC it wouldn't notice that MC is different, and just see MC as normal person in that world
thanks for answering me and I'm happy that they are not just accidents, I'm okay with accidents tha have meanings and reasons, your fanfic is really good, the start might be a little off but I like how this is going and I hope you a have reason for MC Magic, I understand that MC magic is different and I hope you don't make people use magic like mc, the magic in the DC is different, I'm mean the way they do it, people like zatana and good guys use order magic and they ask for permission to use magic and bad guys use chaos magic and don't ask permission but hopefully MC is different and he don't need to ask for permission and even without permission his magic would not be a form of chaos or maybe you might just want use different system which I will be okay with it