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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule6d
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    This would be more surprising. Being human lets him keep his freedom, but becoming a devil makes him stronger. Either is beneficial, so I'd rather be surprised with the outcome.

    Author Chooses - I do what I think would be the most interesting for the story.
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule11d
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    To be fair, unlike british-based education systems, America doesn't have houses for schools. The closest thing would be college fraternities which I don't believe offer those kinds of benefits.

    While Salem uses Incentives. And there are no houses here. Kids and teenagers bond over their education and passions. Study groups are quite common. After all they allow them to learn at a faster rate. I'll give you advice on Charms you give me advice on Potions. A win-win.
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule11d
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    This reminds me of another hp/dxd story that stopped getting updates months ago.

    "Wizards were first created by the devils thousands of years ago. The Devils successfully gave humans the ability to make spells by using mana and their Imagination. They changed their genes so the mana they absorbed would be mutated, allowing them to make their imaginations real. They were the first wizards and witches
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    HP/DxD: Raven
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule11d
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    You should make a cursed tool to scan for strong cursed energy signatures and differentiate the differences between sorcerers and curses. Not only would it be incredibly useful for his goals, but it would allow him a way to see if anyone is following/watching him.

    Ch 32 Gains
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule15d
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    If you're adding Kim's world, might I suggest adding a second female lead.

    Ch 34 CH 33: Interview
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    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule18d
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    As the light began to travel through him, there didn't seem to be any changes. Until it reached his head. His head, the area above his forehead, took a massive change. Literally. A big third eye appeared on his forehead, and his head began to grow into an enormous size for his size, before a tail twice his height and even thicker than him appeared behind his head. It was like a one eyed snake had fused into Brainiac's head.
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    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule20d
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    You're a month late for that joke.

    A/N:I will be dropping this fic...im just fucking with you.
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    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule26d
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    To be fair, multiple guys being attracted to the same woman isn't really something that crazy. The only part that's slightly crazy is that they'd all be willing to be intimate with the same woman and even then it isn't completely unbelievable. If anything, having several women agree to share the same guy is what's more unbelievable. Historically speaking, the only reason why mostly men had harems was because they were the ones usually in power, and those were the only people capable of affording a harem. In the case of fictional worlds like DXD, Naruto, One Piece, etc, powerful people like Sirzechs, Hashirama, or Whitebeard having harems at any point would make sense, since those worlds have supernatural elements, allowing 'power' to be more physical rather than political. If you really wanted to be technical, Big Mom could actually be said to have had a reverse harem, since she had 43 husbands (even if forced, and discarded them after the birth), and I don't believe she has divorced any of them.

    Harem for a guy? Oh, amazing! Magnificent! I couldn't ask for more! Reverse harem aka harem for a girl? Disgusting! Fucking whore! So you're asking a guy to share his lover?! That's obviously the girls' job! Only guys can have harems!
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule28d
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    Other children probably.

    "Shit, what are they feeding this child?" cursed the captain as he looked at Levi who didn't seem to be tired as he kept fighting the three of them to a standstill not losing momentum at all.
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    Avatar: The gamer
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule29d
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    I'd argue that just charmcaster is better. You'd have to deal with Drew getting a divorce to even consider adding her, but also have her still spend time with her son (who'd be the age of her new boyfriend) and ex-husband (who would constantly be reminded of that). There would also be the timeskip between the original and alien force, which you can use that time to have the two of them do whatever they want.

    (A/N: For those of you who haven't seen the notice in the synopsis, I changed my mind about Drew becoming a lover. I don't like harem or anything near it in a modern world setting, and it would be WAY too much drama to end up with her. So, sorry for those of you who don't like the idea, but it happened. So now, it's just Charmcaster.)
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule30d
    Commented

    I believe you missed in n in EsAeLc.

    "EsAeLc eSeHt dEkCiW sLuOs, dNa ReViLeD sUoEtHgIr tNeMhSiNuP-"
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    Who Let This Spider Cook?! (Overlord/Tensura)
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule30d
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    It's been five months since this story claimed that it would be 'adopting' the original, and yet no updates have been made. This is basically taking credit the original deserves while also claiming it will be updated when it won't.

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    HP: Descendant of Merlin
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule1mth
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    I mean it does make sense. While they might be somewhat important to keep the balance of Japan's supernatural side, the cost of helping them would be too high. That's not even mentioning the fact that the whole reason this happened was because of their racist beliefs and need to target someone who should be considered an exile. The gods have almost certainly had losses this bad before, so its likely something they know how to deal with even if it isn't ideal.

    To save some time, I'll write a quick explanation here. I know some of you will probably wonder why the truly powerful gods aren't interfering. Well, we can see from a few chapters back that…they don't really care. We saw from Amaterasu's words through Kurohime that she said, "Shiva-tan is being mean again.". My guess is all those truly powerful gods have lived for so disgustingly long that some brat running his senses or killing a clan isn't really enough to get them to act. That's my guess.
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule1mth
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    The room was completely silent for a few moments before Ezekiel slammed a fist onto the table as he asked, "How many fucking planes did they hijack?"
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    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
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    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    He vanished once more and appeared behind Indra. This time, his hands were clasped together in the tiger seal. Two of his fingers pointed outward, their aim apparent. Igor rushed forward, fully determined to launch the one attack he knew would work on the god.
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    This chapter was awesome!!! I know what I’m spending power stones on when they refresh tomorrow. I’d’ve saved them if I knew the chapter was releasing today.

    Ch 79 Invasion and arrival.
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    I love the amount of tension that’s built up in the chapter. Keep it up!

    Ch 78 Dylan and Battle on the train.
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    Streamer in the Omniverse
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    Either or is fine, however if you go for the harem route then there are two things that are important to do. First is make it believable by making them spend time together. Second is to create a hierarchy/favorite list, loving 'equally' is impossible due to compatibility, time spent together, shared interest, etc. Also make sure that some women won't get along with others, since there is no reasonable way other than mind control to make women get along without issues.

    [I have received comments telling me not to make the story a harem, which might affect the plot if he starts messing around with every woman he sees. That actually makes sense. I will focus more on the plot than the harem and I will not make it a Pokemon game where he has to complete the pokedex.
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    I almost feel bad for them. Then I remember how bad they are at diplomacy.

    "You guys are late."
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    The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
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  • chocolatechipsrule
    chocolatechipsrule2mth
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    Eye of the Deceiver - Can make any event 'false' (rewrites reality so an event becomes true, can technically bring people back to life, can use once a month) [Unlock Condition - Lie to someone about something serious]. Eyes of God - Provides information on a deeper level for whatever you 'scan' [Unlock Condition - Completely understand how one thing works] {Upgradable - Completely understand how multiple things work}. Eye of the Mimic - Can copy abilities that the eye sees, even if physiology doesn't allow it (can use 1 time per day) [Unlock Condition - Copy something someone shows you] {Upgradable - Copy more things}. Eye of the Unknown - Will hide you from people's perception when active, can do whatever you want during this time and people will rationalize it (think SCP-1504, can use 5 minutes a day) [Unlock Condition - Gaslight someone to think an event happened] {Upgradable - Keep gaslighting}

    (Eyes suggestions, their conditions to unlock them and possible conditions to upgrade them if they're upgradeable eyes Here) - Please actually put conditions and whatnot, as that's the important thing for this fic.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
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