Stats shouldn't be a whole chapter.

Now he has to go the long way and across the entire continent if he wants to go to Essos and also deal with hatred of all the people of the place he will live in now. Catelyn also got what she wanted it seems.

Those islands are just barren rock where you can't grow anything. Its a very bad deal. Also he already promised most of the people that worked there to take them back to the mainland so is he now going to tell them to forget about it and stay there. Most people won't want to settle on the iron islands.

Ever since Rose's introduction the MC seems to turn into a joke.

Seems like Rose has no idea about magic so i hope you won't have her match the MC in power. I was disappointed when he said she would win against him in a battle of attrition.

Yeah no this can be taken as a straight up attack at a Lord Paramount in his own home.

Instead of calling himself a god and possibly offending other gods he can just say the truth that he is Rhllor's champion. The god just needs to send a vision to Melisandre and he would have hundreds of followers immediately.

Is he dumb? Rickard is right there so ofcourse its before the rebellion.

If Nick survives this fight and the MC doesn't tell abyone about Nick i would start cheering for Nick to kill Orion.

Is this going to be a slash fic?

He really shouldn't go out of his way to appease those that dislike him. Also the girl seems pretty stupid talking about Persephone when she probably haven't even met her and the fact that Persephone might care more about the MC than her despite being half sisters.

The gods seem to be pretty useless.

You haven't revealed anything yet so he is a kid till than.

Does Olorun look like his Smite version?

Just a waste and that to after so many chapters.

To be honest i think sending Barristan to Daenerys was stupid. That gesture will not move her in the slightest and eaily surrendering the throne to her would seem like you have no respect for any of your bannerman. Also Arya is just annoying with her inability to read the room or just running her mouth whenever she feels like.

He acts like he will have to marry the girl he takes to the ball.

Don't really care about Harry.

Pls no misunderstanding with people thinking he is the heir. Also why hasn't he and Rose told any teacher about the basilisk.