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Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel As Dante

Gotha
GothaLv14Gotha

it's not a problem that he is weak at first, the the biggest problem is his personality that is a big turn off

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AppleBacon
AppleBaconLv2AppleBacon

...for one, you ever bait me with a chapter again and I'll drone strike you. Second, I completely understand.

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Morg535
Morg535Lv14Morg535

Story seems solid to me so far, the only complaints id have is your Jebaiting us with Dickte instead of Dante and how quick your pacing was but your writing and fight scenes are so high quality they slap those small complaints out of existence.

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ChaosLordes
ChaosLordesLv4ChaosLordes

very well dear author. just give out updates and I'll board this ship to where you wanna take us.

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Omni404_Sans
Omni404_SansLv13Omni404_Sans

Hmm I don't realy care Just give me the next chapter

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Shigure2
Shigure2Lv1Shigure2

Honestly if people want an immediate strong mc fic they can find that else where, what I think they fail to understand is that weak to strong is generally what most people prefer But regardless of that it’s something you’re writing for free and for you own enjoyment you shouldn’t have to bow down to make a few ungrateful people happy. A good note to have is that if you get lots of views a few good responses and a medium amount of negative ones, well people complain more if they are unhappy and on the other hand nobody talks when they are happy or more simply: silence on the majority of readers just means you’re doing a good job Keep it up, really like this

Void_Surfer16
Void_Surfer16Lv14Void_Surfer16

I don’t like that he is basically a slave no where close to freedom

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

The speed of strengthening is ok, just a lot of rushing between events, but nothing that gets in the way of the story, the problem is calling the MC a Nephilin, my half-human angel, the MC is clearly half-angel and half-demon, in other words a Nephalem, you can research that will see this, is like thinking that Portuguese and Spanish are one language, despite having similar origins and neighboring countries, they have a big discrepancy! It's the same thing between a Nephilin and a Nephalem.

LongSongGolden
LongSongGoldenLv14LongSongGolden

There are definitely issues, but people don't get angry about bad novels, they get angry with good novels that have a glaring issue or two that stick out like a sore thumb. Work on those and people will be happier (people will always complain but at least it will be a small minority)

5575
5575Lv55575

thanks for all the chapters and personally I love how you are making the story

Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdLv14Sir_Stronghold

I like the novel bro. keep it going. by the way can I get another chappy?

nachodrago888_8
nachodrago888_8Lv1nachodrago888_8

Yo después de leer esto:

Demon_Queen_Lilith
Demon_Queen_LilithLv4Demon_Queen_Lilith

keep up the great work ❤️

Shehroz
ShehrozLv13Shehroz

Dante should be atleast as strong as Lucifer from Marvel. No one on earth can kill him and his true form is OP af.

catalop01
catalop01Lv13catalop01

i like your story. I don't care about the MC being Nerf, I just like reading your book. keep it up and pls don't drop this. thank you

Slipnaet
SlipnaetLv1Slipnaet

Yeah but when did Silver Surfer get involved isn't it supposed to be Quicksilver?

4Eyes
4EyesLv24Eyes

Nah bro, your writing is amazing

MS_SHIBA
MS_SHIBALv3MS_SHIBA

*applause* Author has good taste

M00semaster5
M00semaster5Lv4M00semaster5

the biggest problem with this “wEaK t0 StrOnG” story is that most(99.9999%) authors just have them weak and then the “train” for 2 days and become strong or even worse they “train” off screen for 2 months and then we just see them come back and then they’re instantly strong. i mean this to be constructive so you don’t do these dumb things because every weak to strong story goes down that route of making the MC weak af and stupid but then they train for a week and instantly they’re the strongest because of it.

Pitch_Black36
Pitch_Black36Lv4Pitch_Black36

Please Author don't drop this it's really good, it has a realistic approach in a mess up world where you can die anytime, anywhere.