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Having a powerful MC is fine, but growing up too quickly and easily ruins most of the stories. The systems should only serve as support, such as providing techniques, providing supplements to help with training and physical and mental strengthening, providing plants and possibility of purchasing materials to build ships and things like that, even providing haki seeds to guarantee awakening through training, both for him and the crew, but unfortunately that is not what happens here, we have yet another exaggerated story, in which the Goldfinger makes things boring instead of making things exciting and attractive.
Another story in which the term mutant is shown for what it really is, pejorative, mutation reminds us of a disease, as we are always afraid of a mutation in covid, it reminds us of radioactive monsters in movies, to put it simply, almost everything that most people will relating to listening to mutants is something bad and dangerous!
MC gives me the impression of being someone simple, not an idiot, but someone who doesn't make many plans, doesn't have many ambitions, honestly if it were an original world it could be interesting, seeing the life and discoveries of the young God, but in marvel or in any known and relatively dangerous world... this makes things a bit bad, the mc doesn't take advantage of his birth advantage to learn and develop, he doesn't take advantage of having knowledge of his past life, even if he doesn't want to be king or hero, he doesn't plan to strengthen himself and his loved ones, honestly in general the mc looks more like a common character from an rpg world... I just hope this gets better
As the mc received the memories of the practically, among these memories could be when the practically saw other people practicing different breathing modes and from that he can learn, thus using the solar for him, the fire for his family and the Rock for the army and from water to navy, he can use the knowledge of all these breathing and the dragon dance mode of fire dominance to create a type of breathing exercise that serves the dragons to strengthen the body and dominate the element by strengthening so is their magic, as I sincerely hope to see these dragons evolve, stop being beasts and start to develop draconic languages and other uses of magic.
I previously gave the idea of adding the sorcerer lineage from the world of Harry Potter, but if you don't like this idea, it would be cool to have King Arthur from the world of Fate, he has a dragon's heart, an improved body, in addition to combining a lot with MC's situation, and since he had Merlin as a teacher, he must have learned magic or magicfrat, even if not so advanced, the runes, for example, when combined with those already existing in this world, would have an interesting synergy, because I honestly missed of things that would strengthen magic and physique, and this King Arthur would be good for both.
All he had to do was say that he wanted magic like Dumbledore, remembering how he used fire spells, Harry Potter's magic, which requires intention, will and feelings as catalysts and form and vehicles to happen would be a great addition.
Author friend, I have a suggestion for a story, the mc would be someone from our world, he would fall into a dimensional rift caused by a consequence of a battle of gods, upon entering this rift he would merge with a seed from his own dimension, this seed would sprout and at first it would be something small, like the space of a small farm, the mc's body would not be able to resist the conditions inside this crack, mainly because it contains energy and remains coming from the battles of the gods, the dimensional seed when merge with the mc and perceive the fragile body, it would absorb energies and fragments of things from that battle, make use of these things to transform the mc, but as he was human, he would give powers to human beings based on the memory of the mc, like the lineage of magicians from Harry potter, the super soldier's body, an x gene giving powers similar to Wolverine's, but without claws, some metahuman genes from dc giving psychic powers, the evolutionary capacity through training of humans from one piece. the dimension would have a tower where the mc could live, like a tower of wizards, managed by a spirit tipi mixed with artificial intelligence, there would be study rooms, a library, blacksmithing and other spaces for the mc to develop professions. This dimension would give access to worlds that MC had some knowledge of before, the more knowledge the easier the access, by visiting the worlds and collecting samples of plants, mineral animals and knowledge he strengthened his dimension and himself. This dimension would provide a certain defense and security against Gods and beings of the type, but the mc should still be careful, as its development would be within the capabilities of the new body and soul that was formed, in other words, the mc would not become a god or anything like that. , at most a human with magic and genetic and evolutionary powers and the potential for his first change, of course with rituals and some technologies he could become stronger, but nothing to the point of ruining the story, a good story talks about the journey and not just about being invincible.
Many empires and other governments in Marvel have their own territories and even galaxies and things like that of specific origin, the Nova government for example is in the Milky Way, but in this story, because Star Wars exists together with Marvel, many things may have changed.
Author friend, please improve more mystical beings, just like you did with trolls by using part of the draconic DNA and that of trolls from different worlds, you can improve various animals like this, dragons are a good example, using smaug's DNA with that of dragons from current world, in the future the dragons of Harry potter, fairy tail and warcraft, dxd, you may be able to create digic dragons, which are capable of communicating and using magic.
I recommend that you finish your studies, they can be useful, for work you can make snacks, like cookies or sweets, and sell them at school, in places like public parks, this can help with some income, maintain a good diet and exercise, with the Over time this will help you become stronger physically and mentally. Finally, on your breaks and days off, keep writing, good luck and blessings.