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LongSongGolden

LongSongGolden

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Just living life, reading novels and eating cabbage.

2017-12-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden2min
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    makes sense, aside from old town I don't think any of the other cities/towns nearby actually have ports large enough for his ships (even only 5-10 may be too much)

    Little Oak Garden is a city I decided to create based on the port cities of the region, I didn't find anything more viable on the map to get to Highgarden, I had done this with Old Oak in my first draft, but it's so far that I created a new small city, after all, Westeros has many cities to house millions of inhabitants and we only know the main ones, which gives margin for the creation of new ones, as I did with FrostRoar in the north.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden6min
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    Well you could but it's a big detour into a increasingly narrow bay/inlet, not to mention it ends up as a river and I doubt his ships would fit.

    'I could go there, try to find answers...' Jon thought while again on an edge of the ship alone where he liked to stay thinking. 'But I feel I will regret it, that something even worse will be uncovered... I should think about this after these voyages, I'll first make sure to succeed with my trading company, then I will look into my origins...' Jon reasoned, not wanting his mind to be taken over by worries he should not have right now, his priority at the moment was helping Artica to be self-sustainable, then he would make sure to look into other personal matters.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden10min
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    her*

    "Alright, let's go, Arya." Jon said as he aligned in the middle of the place with Arya, using his small thin sword made of Eldenmetal, Jon drew Darksister, and they both began to train fighting each other, while Jon helped Arya to refine her current skills.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden12min
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    Third*

    Thrid Person POV
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden6h
    Replied to Rillik

    nowhere did anyone say that. I specified that without any backing or funds to speak of it's probably not a great move to start his own family. not that he shouldn't do it at all. its like a broke businessman without any notable assets or connections deciding he want to start a venture capital firm. Sure he may have the skills and the knowledge but skills and knowledge don't mean money magically appears from the sky or that banks will extend a line of credit to some broke guy living in the slums in a gang controlled apartment complex. Not to mention he is a unknown that people don't yet trust.

    Joining the Corleone family under Michael's leadership was far from ideal for Lorenzo. Working with Don Vito, or even with Michael in the early days of his reign, might have been manageable. However, Lorenzo was all too aware of the transformation Michael would undergo, becoming increasingly ruthless and distrustful, even towards those who had proven their loyalty. The prospect of navigating this treacherous landscape, with ambitions of rising to the role of don and earning the title "Godfather" within the Corleone family, meant inevitably confronting a formidable Michael. Given Michael's growing power and suspicion, Lorenzo could easily become just another obstacle to be removed.
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden7h
    Commented
    'Do not dare to use the name of god in vain!'
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    Sussy Baka in MHA
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden7h
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    … Probably because of another magical trick of our God and Savior Amongus… Amen.
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    Sussy Baka in MHA
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden7h
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    "Oh, he just sighed! How cute!"
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden7h
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    "What do you mean by a recessive gene? I haven't heard of such things!"
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    Sussy Baka in MHA
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  • LongSongGolden
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    100% I forgot that was an MHA novel lol. picked a couple new ones to read and couldn't remember what was Marvel, DC, MHA, DxD, etc.

    "That's what I've been meaning to tell you all this while, Mr. Suzuki. The child's red hair may probably be because of a recessive gene from either you or Ms. Aya's family that has bloomed just now, or because his future quirk affects his hair color. We don't know for certain yet, however, all the tests point to you as the real parent, so please don't get angry"
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    Sussy Baka in MHA
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden17h
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    imposter baby D:

    '... Why did I become a baby out of nowhere?'
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    Sussy Baka in MHA
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden19h
    Commented

    it's alright for a first chapter. It needs some editing though.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Template System
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden20h
    Commented

    they were friends because he was reclusive?? and "very well" fits better than "very much"

    His parents who died in this world were friends of Iruka because of his reclusive nature; Iruka took care of him very much.
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden20h
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    ?

    A single strike comparable to an S-rank ninjutsu; such a slash even made a Kage change color.
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden1d
    Commented

    oh boy I just love this kill em with kindness attitude he has.

    "No, but it did hurt my feelings~" John smiled as he lightly teased his manager, knowing full well that she absolutely hated it when he did it.
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    The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!
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  • LongSongGolden
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    Peter's expression darkened with sorrow as he took in the sight of these tormented beings. Memories of a haunting scene from 'Full Metal Alchemist' flashed before him—the tragic story of Nina, the little girl merged with her pet dog, who refused to eat, until finally, someone granted her wish for death to end her misery.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden1d
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    I HUNGER FOR ROCK!!!!
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden1d
    Commented
    Netizens were chattering, making all sorts of wild guesses.
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    Starting as a Class Five Mutant
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden1d
    Commented

    inconsistent translation.

    "Ultimate Threat?"
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    Starting as a Class Five Mutant
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  • LongSongGolden
    LongSongGolden1d
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    "We were so arrogant in front of a mutant of this caliber?"
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    Starting as a Class Five Mutant
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