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Shehroz

Shehroz

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I am a novel critic and a reader of novels of all types. My favorite is "warlock of magus world".

2021-10-20 JoinedPakistan
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz1h
    Commented

    Tbh the chapter has stupid assumptions. Kyle is barely able to handle sniper bullets. If germancy using anti missile guns, then kyle would be dead in one shot. These chinese novels dont make any sense.

    Ch 76 IMUC-CHAPTER 76: WE HAVE KYLE
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    I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards
    Movies · DarkShadow95
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz1d
    Posted

    Why did u remove Sasuke based Naruto novel? Kindly add it back and also this novel is awesome.

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    Star Wars: Skywalker
    Movies · Link_Id
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz1d
    Posted

    "World is sinking" ~ Famous last words

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    One Piece: The Strongest Creature
    Anime & Comics · GregariousLion
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz6d
    Commented

    Tbh the real enemy is bloodracen itself. In most fan theories and original GOT tv series, bran stark was possesed by a Targareon who led to the end of Night walkers and became king hence proving that prophecy was fulfilled but not how it should have been. Instead, Bloodraven manipulated everyone to become king and caused death of all parties involved to take throne.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: The Boy Who Would Be King - Part 5
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    A King Or Not? (GOT)
    Book&Literature · Ancient_Demon
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz7d
    Commented
    "Nonsense," Patton barked. "You went above and beyond, and I won't have you belittling your efforts. Effective immediately, I'm promoting you to the rank of Captain. You've earned it, son."
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    Godfather System
    Movies · NewComer714
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz7d
    Replied to AlterGilgamesh

    True. I knew that girl would die due to her mother.

    "Aaaaarghhhh!" Dominic screamed as he punched the wall repeatedly with all his might.
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    Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz7d
    Replied to D1vineMonarch

    He is 12 years old. He has no ambitions bcz he is bastard. If he had ambition then thousands of people will die due to his rebellion, so he prefers to lead a silent life while helping his sister.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
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    HOTD: Aerion Targaryen
    TV · MrGood23
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz8d
    Posted

    A very good fanfiction. Only thing it lacks is update stability and MC powerup.

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    GOT: The Golden Lion
    Book&Literature · MrPlotThickens
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz8d
    Commented

    Make it harem since MC is a villain

    I'm open to suggestions but the initial idea is Alicia Clark
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    Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz10d
    Commented

    Kill klein and everything ends tbh. Idk why u need MC anyways.

    Ch 139 Chapter 58:The Fuck?
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    Lord of Mysteries:Fire of Destruction
    Book&Literature · TheWitnes
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz15d
    Commented
    "Haha… That's a good one," Patrick chuckled, mimicking the drill sergeant's voice. "You'll wish you'd never left your mama's skirts! Ah, haha! So funny!"
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    Godfather System
    Movies · NewComer714
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz16d
    Posted

    It is like reading a hardcore mode difficulty novel where no matter how strong Mc is he always lose. Huge plot holes and bad writing. 3rd hokage wants to kill MC just bcz he thinks he is rebel ninja, i mean hokage has no proof and no grounds to so that and still he is targeting MC. MC is tbh a victim, he is just trying to survive and havent hurt anybody at all.

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    Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward
    Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz16d
    Commented

    Tbh stroy is extremely slow. Kindly rush it a little bit. We need canon arcs to appear and end fast. Fanfictions arent supposed to add depth, instead ot is meant to show us different way of life in same canon scenario.

    Ch 58 Chapter 56: A Warm Reception
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    The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld
    Anime & Comics · Maya_Matengele
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz16d
    Commented
    Lorenzo couldn't help but notice the "I Want You for U.S. Army" posters featuring Uncle Sam plastered on the walls, along with other posters depicting images of duty and patriotism.
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    Godfather System
    Movies · NewComer714
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz18d
    Commented
      Naruto is autistic.
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    Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward
    Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz18d
    Commented

    Kaidou should steal rogers child and wife when she is pregnent. Hehe cuck the pirate king !

    Ch 60 Beast Pirates Vs Roger Pirates
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    One Piece: Build The Strongest Beast Pirates
    Anime & Comics · 0StolenDream0
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz19d
    Commented

    Dante should be atleast as strong as Lucifer from Marvel. No one on earth can kill him and his true form is OP af.

    Ch 16 Addressing the Criticisms
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    In Marvel As Dante
    Movies · RaedaX_1
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz21d
    Commented

    Story is slow tbh.

    Ch 11 Unexpected improvement of relationship and visits to the Corleone
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    Godfather System
    Movies · NewComer714
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz21d
    Posted

    One of the best Pokemon fanfictions. The only problem is the updating. Updating of chapters is very slow.

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    Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger
    Anime & Comics · stromerthaha
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  • Shehroz
    Shehroz21d
    Commented

    Include hancock, nami, vivi and rebecaa as well.

    what you guys think, should i have gone for hancock or robin, it was a tough choice but i decided to go with robin first as it would be easier, you guys know how hancock is, arrogant and proud,.
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    One Piece: the son of Kaido
    Anime & Comics · truepowerscaler1
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