RaedaX_1
Honestly if people want an immediate strong mc fic they can find that else where, what I think they fail to understand is that weak to strong is generally what most people prefer But regardless of that it’s something you’re writing for free and for you own enjoyment you shouldn’t have to bow down to make a few ungrateful people happy. A good note to have is that if you get lots of views a few good responses and a medium amount of negative ones, well people complain more if they are unhappy and on the other hand nobody talks when they are happy or more simply: silence on the majority of readers just means you’re doing a good job Keep it up, really like this
The speed of strengthening is ok, just a lot of rushing between events, but nothing that gets in the way of the story, the problem is calling the MC a Nephilin, my half-human angel, the MC is clearly half-angel and half-demon, in other words a Nephalem, you can research that will see this, is like thinking that Portuguese and Spanish are one language, despite having similar origins and neighboring countries, they have a big discrepancy! It's the same thing between a Nephilin and a Nephalem.
the biggest problem with this “wEaK t0 StrOnG” story is that most(99.9999%) authors just have them weak and then the “train” for 2 days and become strong or even worse they “train” off screen for 2 months and then we just see them come back and then they’re instantly strong. i mean this to be constructive so you don’t do these dumb things because every weak to strong story goes down that route of making the MC weak af and stupid but then they train for a week and instantly they’re the strongest because of it.