Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

My brother, the battle was good but I have to say how over-the-top this Weavile was. He shouldn't move properly after taking so many effective hits, especially when the only strengths of Sneaseals and Weaviles are his speed and attack. I don't even want to imagine what it takes to take down a Tyranitar.

Totally meaningless plot in my opinion (a fairy-type Pokémon community being exterminated by a dark-type pack), even in reality it is difficult for predators to be able to exterminate all their prey, it is not sustainable, it would be bad even for the predators. In addition to the exaggerated drama at this point in the story, it was better to have this type of difficulty facing a pseudo legendary or an actual legendary.

This was an awesome chapter I was literally coming out of my seat as I read this it invoked so many emotions I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow great last few chapters, really shows that the pokemon world isn't all fun and games. Also great writing and definitely added to my library. On the way to being one of the best pokemon fics I have read. Keep up the good work! 👍

Amazing chapter. But I feel so sad for those cleffa and clefairies

Muito bom, mais vc tá me fazendo chorar autor

Went for the drama without consideration, do you think weavile have shuckle defense or something ?? Also if a single metal claw is letal to fairy type they would have been exterminated long ago, also poisoning shouldn't be so serious (almost dying in 5min) otherwise there would be no way koga could be endorsed by the league

One of the most intense pokemon encounters I've ever read. Good job 👍

Who hurt you?

I was not expecting these few chapters. Honestly makes me hyped for whats to come, considering that everything isn’t going to be a black and white power fantasy

Friend, I like your story and your characters, but I don't like your way of describing this chapter, it seems like a poem and not a story, I will try to continue reading

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Really amazing chapter. Very well done