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Vatsal_061mthCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12- Vatsal_061mthCommented
story is too much like a fairytale all good people are too good and are willing to help MC with anything. All side characters are with no fault.and about harry's family being some heros family it just feels wrong hero are not define by family. it just feel like "potter=good=power" it feels like by becoming lord of potter mean he will become some god of justice and light. and everyone will worship him for it there is no feeling of struggle for him achieving anything his family is so good that he has money, power, political power, tell me something he has to achieve. he has everything and Voldemort is just some slightly powerful wizard.
Ch 54 Chapter 54: “Meeting Sirius's Girlfriend” - Vatsal_063mthCommented
Bro me too
I was going on like this until a year ago. A year ago, I started to feel unsatisfied with manga, and I found out that some of the manga I was reading had lightnovels. So I started reading light novels. The problem between anime and manga now appeared in the same way between manga and novels. Although I wasn't a big reader of books, I loved lightnovels. I was constantly reading Chinese, Korean and Japanese light novels. In this way, I went all the way to fanfics and was lost in this bottomless well. - Vatsal_066mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 01
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2. You Don't want Harem. - Vatsal_066mthCommented
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2. You Don't want Harem. - Vatsal_067mthCommentedCh 15 Martial God
- Vatsal_067mthCommentedCh 23 Chapter 23 - Team Hunt
- Vatsal_067mthCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20 - Ice Cream Shop & Picking Up Soft Things
- Vatsal_067mthReplied to Vatsal_06Ch 8 Lin Yue
- Vatsal_068mthCommentedCh 41 Doomed meeting
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You are making him more emotional than needed.not even Naruto is this good. It's like you are forcing him to be good. Yes it make his character more depth but its not fun to read same emotional baggage. While giving him more emotional depth you are making him 2D who is not even slightly selfish. I am not telling you to change previous chapter but in future chapter you should make him be Little more selfish he is human.
Ch 19 How To Train Your Dragon - Vatsal_069mthCommented
oh that's why he died to make Naruto suffer like himself.
Sigh, I'm really sighing like an old man these days. Thinking about it won't change anything but will only make it even worse. But I will make sure that in the future, my Child will definitely suffer like this.