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Leitor_Onisciente

Leitor_Onisciente

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I'm just here to read and judge your stories. Don't take me seriously đŸ˜șđŸ‡§đŸ‡·

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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente4d
    Replied to GuYueFangYuan

    Who ensures that the plot is fixed? He doesn't even know how he was transmigrated, he may simply be manipulated, expecting the plot to follow the same as the canon is silly. It's much smarter to manipulate him to your advantage, letting Hiruzen die would just be stupid.

    Ch 570 Chapter 564 : Naruto's Outburst & Hidden Grass' Crisis
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente4d
    Commented
    Ch 16 Chapter 14
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente4d
    Replied to Tano_De_La_Cierva

    Either way, you don't need the addition of Minato to do that. Fujin has been interacting with Hiruzen for a long time, if he doesn't save him it will not only be a scoundrel of the character, but also stupidity because Hiruzen is his main supporter

    Ch 570 Chapter 564 : Naruto's Outburst & Hidden Grass' Crisis
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente4d
    Replied to Tano_De_La_Cierva

    But how was he going to summon Minato with his soul trapped in Naruto?

    Ch 570 Chapter 564 : Naruto's Outburst & Hidden Grass' Crisis
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente5d
    Commented

    Will he follow the Empire to the end? I see no reason not to, especially if you take into account his past.

    Ch 14 Chapter 12
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    Akame ga KILL: Killer
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Replied to Leitor_Onisciente

    Madara agrees with me

    Ch 569 Chapter 563 : Spirit Transformation Technique
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Commented

    The risk of this jutsu is not worth it even with weaker opponents, as the original has already shown several times that an immensely powerful ninja can be killed by a much weaker one if he is careless. It would be best to create sub-techniques from this jutsu and start developing yin knowledge

    Ch 569 Chapter 563 : Spirit Transformation Technique
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Commented

    My God, what do you mean she's already dead?

    Ch 13 Chapter 11
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    Akame ga KILL: Killer
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Commented

    That's what I'm talking about, slow-living stories need more interactions with other characters. One of the best chapters in this story.

    Ch 568 Chapter 562 : 27569
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Replied to Bouncy_Beast

    Fujin Uchiha

    Ch 568 Chapter 562 : 27569
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Commented

    Things are going to get better

    Ch 12 News
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    Akame ga KILL: Killer
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente6d
    Commented

    Fique bem mano đŸ‘đŸŸ

    Ch 12 News
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    Akame ga KILL: Killer
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente8d
    Replied to Leitor_Onisciente

    I hope that was well explained.

    Ch 60 Chapter 59 : Opening Salvo
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente8d
    Replied to Leitor_Onisciente

    All of them in the anime and manga look like just giant pokemon that possess a much higher brute force than normal ones, everything they represent is ignored. In the movies you can see a Celebi going back in time a bit, but that's about it.

    Ch 60 Chapter 59 : Opening Salvo
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente8d
    Replied to DemiGod_2972

    Example: Dialga is a time pokemon, so its power is to control time. But this is rarely shown in the original or never shown at all. And in games, all he has is a Hyper Beam called the roar of time. Darkrai controls dreams and nightmares, but everything he does is no different from anything a ghost or dark pokemon does.

    Ch 60 Chapter 59 : Opening Salvo
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente8d
    Commented

    Bro, have you ever thought about using symbolism as a form of power to differentiate legendaries from regular pokemon? It's just an idea.

    Ch 60 Chapter 59 : Opening Salvo
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente8d
    Replied to Noble_K1ng

    I also think it has a lot of trainers and pokemon. The only explanation for this is that the planet is 5x larger than Earth.

    Ch 60 Chapter 59 : Opening Salvo
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente10d
    Replied to Leitor_Onisciente

    Good chapter

    Ch 14 Aizen's Black
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente10d
    Commented

    Koga's death would have been a better outcome. That said, the story is pretty good, I hope you don't feel sorry for killing powerful soul reapers if the plot calls for it.

    Ch 11 Future witholding
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  • Leitor_Onisciente
    Leitor_Onisciente13d
    Replied to Leitor_Onisciente

    I said I touched on this subject, I don't think it would be a problem for you to create your own kekkei genkai, after all it's a fanfic. I believe that people will accept it if the creation process makes sense. It's no different than creating the original jutsus themselves.

    Ch 561 Chapter 555 : Categorizing Kekkei Genkai (1)
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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