Comments of chapter undefined of Lannister's Sin of Pride

Am I the only one who doesn't care about the 7 deadly sins?i mean he can literally solo them in a second.

I tell you author, I kind of read on automatic, this form of writing that looks more like a report does not excite me and this final revelation just left me BRUH

bruh..... I am not yet sold on the idea of the sins. I don't think they add anything of value and they seem redundant. Worst part id that they are ocs which means they don't even have plot value. Will see how author develops them. Ocs almost always kill fanfics for me.

I like the story, the past two chapters however? Boring. They felt more like summaries..a form of narration which was probably the goal but still hope we go back to actual POV instead of going through a recounting of what happened.

this whole 7ds bs is hella forced. Literally just came outta nowhere, didn't even show the recruitment nor prior interactions

Ok to be honest got caugh off guard there with the ellia alive stuff i was in the idea that maybe couse his pride he wouldnt care about such stuff, not bad at all tho got that spicy unexpected feeling wich i love

Thanks for the chapter

Tywin would never do such a stupid thing as to let his heir to hang out with common folk, that means there is no way that tywin will give him a mission such as eliminating bandit groups. Author really didn't get the personalities of characters very well. The talk between him and Jaime while tywin was gutting the elk, or what was that thing, shows how he treat others and common folk, but at the same time him sparing people in harenhall and taking aria as water girl shows that he is not one of rude, he's very practical man.

oh the irony, he lets lyanna and everyone that is involved in the war die, and just because he saves elia martell we are supposed to rejoice?

Boring boring boringgggggggggygg!!!!!!!

good chappy, please ignore those bafoons on the sidelines screaming trash out of their puny little hearts out

its fits with Pride to have Henchmen to order around . still its just too much. have fun

I hoped soo much that he won't do something this stupid, but alas this team was formed and such a cringe chapter. Gonna see the next 2 chapters, but if the novel goes on same route then it's gonna be another dropped story of this author, cause readers will foefeit

I'm waiting for the Mc to interact with the big players

ı think escanor reyne would be better choice as a character. more violent, action scenes, chance against mountain-armory future fights, take the castle rock, lion kingdom... maybe couple adventures in essos between, finally fight against night king become hero-king...

Thanks for chapter

how about after iron born rebellion go to Essos to get valyrian steel weopons for seven sins and Lannister sword.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter