the lacn of dragons or the alone part in the synopsis is a concern

free cissy

i know that a normal horse is 10 Silver and in his Mind its okay buying passage for 40 gold? mc cant be that dumb.

this story gets more confusing as heck...

the time shifting perspectives and recaps make the story more confusing than anything. Making the "timeline" Activitys a Mess. Just tell happenings as they happen, ther was not once a üast scene that cleared anything.

Why write Anbushes when Meaning Anbu !? making no sense

any chance name the Werwolves into skinchanger or wargs?

this story and all the storys from the author are like a Monkey wrote it. All usual norms of a story are thrown out the window. -speak- instead of "Speak" Names and in general sentences are HORRIBLE Hedwig is called Balkia DUDE are you mad?! Harry reffers to shop owners as Master Krum is KRAM This Silly things are everywhere. IT CANT BE THAT HARD to proof read it and to get names right. This author 100% google translate his storys from other authors.

insane how this storry has 4.66 stars. The Names alone lets you puke blood .. KRAM?!?!? DUDE what is this

what is "On Behalf of Daeron" mean? like PoV ??can you not invent the tire a new? i saw you had already another story running and you still make rooki mistakes. Please seperate Thougt 'i think' and Speaking "i tell you" chapter 1 i think thats a problem

can you please copy paste your chapters into "Grammarly" thats a free tool for writers to check there works . you have so many silly sentenses it kills the reading flow completly.

someone to check on your sentences would be cool . some just make no sense.

is this ai Written or Translatet? Different names are thrown about like candy.... realy trash to read

a bit much on the Philosiphical side this chapter so meh

you micromanage too much

this is a cheap Steal of a copy pasty Story, Orignial has already 200+ chapters released for free on other Sites LameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLameLame

i hope the next chapters come a bit faster what was that 2 weeks now?

maybe adjust the all compassing wall from 10 to 25miles per side? if you fly even close with the Proportions of the images then his "House" alone is like 5x5 miles big

i bit madness you think that she could keep up with that speed of Lee with 4 gates open. Naruto at start of Shippuden would have lost to lee here 99/100 fights. Alone the Pebble's should have killed her becase they broke the sound barrier no? should have been at least wayyy more close

i think its a mistake giving Viseris a Dragon. First you could have just let him die in the fire becase he had NO fire Immunity in the show and would be a good way to get rid of him . The last chapters are a real disapointment, the beginning was realy good if your forgett the war conclusion and the Siege on kings landing that was realy bad becase you just skipped it all.