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4_Seasons1dCommentedCh 10 Chapter 6a-The Liberating Truth!- 4_Seasons5dReplied to TrueFamine
I know he has tons of foods and unlimited resources but Im talking about how hes doing all this in a span of 1 year. and nerfed instant mastery does not automatically give you knowledge on building advanced technology especially not in a year
Krelln was now eleven years old, and he had built 1,500 hoverbikes. He locked himself in his laboratories just to focus on the goal of making more hoverbikes. He built machines for an assembly line to produce things faster, and the people were more than willing to help. - 4_Seasons6dReplied to Kingoffrogs
Even with help from the assembly line and others, it's unrealistic how fast he's progressing. He's terraforming a mountain, feeding 5k people, and building all this tech in just a year. Where does he even get the schematics for it all? dont tell he just 'figures it out' cuz thats just weak writing
Krelln was now eleven years old, and he had built 1,500 hoverbikes. He locked himself in his laboratories just to focus on the goal of making more hoverbikes. He built machines for an assembly line to produce things faster, and the people were more than willing to help. - 4_Seasons6dCommented
so youre telling me he singlehandedly created 1500 hover bikes in a year. Its already ridiculous that an 11 yr old is leading these many people, but this just takes the cake.
Krelln was now eleven years old, and he had built 1,500 hoverbikes. He locked himself in his laboratories just to focus on the goal of making more hoverbikes. He built machines for an assembly line to produce things faster, and the people were more than willing to help. - 4_Seasons6dCommented
this is hella lame
His hair was long, reaching down to his nape. Behind his ear, he embedded an attachment in his skin. It was a small black mark like a birthmark. His finger touched the mark, and at once, a mask unfolded. It was the mask of Star-Lord from the Guardians of the Galaxy. - 4_Seasons12dCommented
edgy ahh name
"I will call you Shadow Star," Aldril continued, his tone brimming with warmth and respect. "Since your beauty lies in the darkness and because you will be the beacon of light that guides me in the darkness." - 4_Seasons13dCommented
this a korean fanfic?
"I'm from Busan... No, I'm from Braunauamin." - 4_Seasons16dCommented
bro really cooked with this line🙏😭
"That sword is as much your own strength as the power in your hands. If you can reject the power of your own soul, why stop there? Why not reject your cherished blade also? The light in your eyes, the power in your limbs, the hard skin you wear, the overwhelming Reiatsu you are so proud of; why not reject all of them? The reason you can't is because the moment you do so, Kenpachi Zaraki will cease to exist." - 4_Seasons19dCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7: Catching the Pirates
- 4_Seasons1mthCommentedAnd without makeup, Suki turned out to be quite an attractive lady. Very much so. Though maybe it's just my hormones overflowing, but unlikely... probably.
- 4_Seasons3mthCommented
its that type of fanfic... Yea Im out🙂
This paragraph has been deleted. - 4_Seasons3mthCommented
ngl man. That was kinda forced. It might have been better if you had denied it, allowing the mystery around him to deepen from Wednesday's point of view and let her unravel his secrets on her own, it could have been a compelling plot point, but it seems you missed that opportunity.
Ch 10 Q&A - 4_Seasons3mthCommented
Bro folded so easily
"Alright, fine, Merlin's beard, you're persistent," Ezra conceded. "Let's go somewhere secluded and I'll answer your questions." - 4_Seasons3mthReplied to Peryite
yeah I guess youre right, the translation is decent, its just the dialogues that irks me with these chinese fics. Like if youre gonna post an mtl fanfic in this app, might as well edit it, remove the racist stuff and make the conversations realistic, maybe readers will actually give it a decent rating
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- 4_Seasons3mthCommentedCh 4 Escape