I believe I read the first version of the Naruto FF that you wrote, I don't remember much, but this one I thought was very promising, I liked the chapter, thanks bro

What you said makes sense, but I chose the suspension of disbelief, let's see what the author will cook up so we know if it will continue to be worth following or not, peace peace peace

You were surgical in that comment my friend, you summed up what I think, I want to see more protoganism from Dune, Gardevoir can influence Blaziken in a not so aggressive and direct way, maybe with wet dreams and such. What do you think about giving Dune an aura talent, author-san? Make our land shark even more OP, thanks for the hard work 🙇

It seems a bit of a waste for him not to join the Hephaestus family with the power of forging, if he was going to dedicate himself more to dungeon diving it would be better to get a more useful power for that, wouldn't it?

The Artemis family is really nice, I like the characters

Nicolas be like:

I don't know about his father, but his mother and sister seem like good people, is it so difficult to be cordial? think of them as distant relatives or roommates, if your third cousin comes to spend some time with you, interact with her. In this short interaction with her, the MC seemed a little edgey, whether you like it or not, they are your family in this world, act like you care about them at least, to avoid headaches, then when you graduate from the academy and have some money, get out of the house

I think this was one of the best chapters of a Naruto FF I've ever read