Can't imagine anything more stupid for and author than disrespect for arts and readers. Cause it's exactly the case when someone publishes a thing without proper check and observation. Only an imbecile or a child can be this irresponsible to publish something uncomplete.

Another imbecile of an author, and even that would be a compliment to call him one, more like passerby that wrote some shit on a wall, that tries to spam website with another third rate writining.

Author delete this novel and stop embracing yourself or stop making dumb mistakes. How can someone imagine a castle on a map. Do you even understand how many floors in hogwarts and how many dimensional the map must be to show everything. Marauders map showed it via magic and was made using some folding, which is a very long and tedious thing

I did not read the books, so asking the ones that have. Was there a difference on timetable of events ? Specifically on Harry's visit to diagon alley just before the departure. Cause malfoy brothers meet harry and then author writes that mc still has 2 months for hogwarts to start

Hm, at least we know that this author is very bad at managing his lines and publishes without proper observation

One of the best logic based fanfictions. A good power up system, with mc being unique and the reason for him to get to the pinnacle, cause some idiot authors think that they can bullshit about mc having knowledge of some third rate university and with that knowledge dominating the whole world. The only downsides of this story is the vomit forcing scenes about mc getting "adopted" as grandson.to tell the truth, I'm really disgusted with this immortal pair and their part in this novel, and the need to wait so long for new chapters, and of course hope that there won't be a shit about this flamels in new ones

Oh, I'm sorry for confusion. Was not speaking about mc being talentless, I was speaking about you author. If I know that I'm shity at CS go, I wont ever play it. If I know that I'm without talent at singing, then in this world no one going to hear me making an attempt. So novels are the same thing, talentless people should not embrace themselves and spam website with their shity fics or even full fledged stories, cause readers can't find decent ones with the need to browse thousands of novels

At first you think that it's a decent novel but the reality will hit you very hard. The case of being talentless again, with so many mistakes, like forgetting the stuff you spoke before, making dumb decisions like not giving mc the knowledge about world, but mc act as if he knows it all, having no understanding of martial arts and real fight but speaking as if you spend 3-5 hours on streets fighting other gangs. Shame that spent my time reading like 20 something chapters

And yet again no logic. 21th chapter speaks about him having no knowledge on devil fruits and this world, and by the time he acquired the fruit he spent some time in this city, but did not look for information on world government and other stuff, but a few chapters ago there were stuff like mc knows lots about one piece world (if a man did not look for something at the start, and some knows that its exactly 72 hours, he wont look for it ever again). Of course it's an act of idiot not to give transmigrator the knowledge of world, cause readers know about it and by logic author too, so either author puts himself in readers skin or opposit, so in any case it's logical that mc should not be blind to stuff. That not only makes the story logical and intresting, but also prevents author from dumb mistakes. Like in some situation people think from their own perspective and dumb authors always forget some details and assume that mc should act that way, forgetting about the detail of not giving mc the knowledge of the world.

Yeah she has a gym in her house that has equipment of a high quality which only few can get, cause I doubt it's easy to forge something that heavy and yet she is from wealthy family that always dependet on money and never approached power. And people are lazy, so there is no possibilities that mc arranged it himself cause in that case he would just take dojo over and live in it

Don't know the reason why author acts so dumb, but it's so cliche to create your own enemy

Yeah, that could have been his uniqueness- devouring meat. You could have explained luffy's strength to that too, he consumes lots of meat, so a growth by eating strong opponents could make some edge. And even a little bit cannibal mc can do, but then again in one piece there are lots of strong animals and even kaydo can be counted as a beast

Mc needs something unique. Cause without anything like mysterious power it would be dumb to assume that he should be at the pinnacle of the world. Cause there are billions, and why someone that author added should have privilege of unique body or talent. So just saying that mc I'd super talented is an action of really dumb author, that is on bad terms with logic. And of course that something should, but it better not to be just devil fruit.

Like the idea of lone mc. So many stupid novels with useless relationship, where mc could get all by himself but dumb authors make them join someone or recruit, and in the end it's mc that does everything, so this "comrades" are useless.

A story of 12 year old arrogant prick. Talent? This author never heard of anythjng like that, just assumed that he could bullshit and make it harder for readers to find decent novel while they will encounter such a shity ones.

Stop giving yourself fake votes author, no reader gonna spend his time on something this shity with a setup of some delusional sick idiot. Just the naming is enough to get the whim of idiocy

Author stop acting dumb, it irritates. How can you add a comment from student that says about ingredient being poisonous. At least try to use your brain matter or make someone with one if you have no to read your chapters before publishing. You set it so slughorn used the potion on acorn, and how can someone be that dumb to ask something about poison, when the one that potion was used on was not a human being. Even animals, forget about plants won't be poisoned by the same things that could easily kill human being. The easiest example is chicken blood. Human being will die, but a cat or dog can it chicken meat raw (with blood in it) and gonna be OK, forget about farmers using chicken blood as fertilizer for some plants.

Really, what is it. The more you read, the more confused you become. This author utters so much stupid things, that you start doubting his age being of a grown up, more like 14 year old snotty idiot

A novel by talentless idiot, that watched a shity anime and run to write a fanfiction about useless character. Mc not only too op, but author pools new techniques out of his ass as soon as mc needs it, so very poorly managed power setup. At most this author is 16 year old

Just from the term "hokage world" we can deduct about this author being another chinese imbecile that has no respect toward arts and novelists, so the reason chinese are not respected around the world