Comments of chapter undefined of Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

He should have let Jon die and taken his appearance using your powers. That would have made you the candidate to be the king.

I'm thinking it's pretty cool, but is he going to follow and do everything the Starks say?

not liking the dialogue so far

You didn't mention how he ensured the loyalty of Skitter and Fenrir, a wolf won't be loyal just coz it woke up healed. Jon saw the biggest direwolf he had ever seen? Correction, first direwolf. They only see regular wolves until canon.

Hopefully he checks there genes for firstmen or possibly dragonrider bloodline

One idea I would like to suggest make his rib cage and fenrirs a solid bone plate like a space marine from war hammer 40k it would greatly increase the protection of his vital organs as it would be like having plate armor inside his body

Thanks! love the concept. There are some details that are off, or maybe you're going for an AU? idk, I'm a detail-oriented person so they stick out to me, but they don't detract from the story much anyways.

I want to see the mc do things not the plot do things for the mc 😐 (why add a forced plot when they almost killed John when they could just kidnap him that way it would have been possible to happen in the série)

Thanks for the chapter.

Какая-та дичь получилось сперва сказав по канону и батс и нет канона а почему а потому что Джон с хренали чуть не умер а нахуя надо было использовать Старков не могли другого персонажа пихнуть какогото родственников

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter 😊

This is a fire fanfiction

Thxs for the chap

Who's that pokemon? It's a normal and dark type. It's a Wolf, and it has black Fur main..?

This lit

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for chapter