What a disappointment that the MC is another simp of the Stark family, he started the fic so well with a self-respecting MC but now he's becoming a servant of the Stark family.How sad I don't even know why I still try to read GOT fanfic

I know this technology but why would the entity give it to him? The desires are gone and I don't think a being of that magnitude would be so good as to give something for free.

I liked this, it broke this "all Starks are Honorable" thing, I hope that now the MC focuses more on bringing together all humans under his command, time is what the MC doesn't lack

I hope he's not just another Stark, there's Essos, which for me is much easier to conquer, it has more magic and technology. The lore of Essos is much more interesting than that of Westeros. PS the Targaryen family really needs to get screwed

He explained that the MC is a rhoynar (I just don't know how a rhoynar got beyond the wall and the free folk clan), From what I've read so far, the MC's dragon is different from the Valyrian dragons, I just don't know how the author will explain this, and there are many other things that don't even make sense according to the original work.

For me, Essos is much more interesting than Westeros. Regarding the name of the MC's house I would recommend Pendragon, Ambrosius maybe Figarland.

'500,000 strong men live', with this contingent of men why haven't they already conquered the seven kingdoms?, the meadow is the most fertile region of Westeros and can only muster an army of 100,000 Men,

I think it would be good for the author to put the UA tag, the things that were shown and explained do not exist in the GOT Canon. I started reading this fic because I thought I would follow the plot during the dance season,But that's not the main proposal of this fic and that wasn't made clear in the synopsis.

From what I know of the books, Geralt is different from the others Witcher,From what I know he survived many other mutations so he is stronger, faster and more resistant.

I don't want to discourage the author but this is a desert (it's like Antarctica), probably only white walkers live in this area

Can I ask what video you watched to create this fic?, my brain can't connect a rhoynar who lives in Essos to the far north (lands of Always Winter)

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So far this fic hasn't given me any feelings of anxiety for more chapters and considering the path the plot is going I don't think this fic is for me, good read for those who liked it

One thing that always disappoints me in these dragon dance fics is that there is no dancing, I came to read a fic expecting dragon battles and it came out with nothing

So far the MC is just a disappointment to me, he doesn't have anything interesting nor is his personality anything worth mentioning

I saw some comments saying that this is someone else's fic so I was wondering if this fic will have an ending? Is it already complete?

Because balerion doesn't burn down the cave with the MC and his dragon inside, dragons aren't dumb like other animals

I let 20 chapters accumulate and still this fight isn't over yet, it's getting boring

I don't think it's bad that you chose this, I just thought the wishes were bad and cliché and everyone in the comments is saying the same thing, Now in relation to dragons, I talked about this because for me the relationship between a knight and his dragon is much better developed In Eragon's world, with 1 wish the MC would have eternal youth, magic and a war machine that would never betray him

Whenever I see a GOT fic I hope the author knows the Eragon books and gets the MC to ask for a dragon egg from that world but that never happens, The MC always goes for those desires that are already clichés in GOT fics, such as Valyrian blood or the first men/Stark