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That felt like a The End
Is hedwig not in this story?
The words are modern and dont fit the setting. not very out of place tho
I really hate characters that break the universes rules so
I really hope he doesnt get beyond basics for free
Why are you calling her vice? Shes the pres
Morons never seen a scapegoat
Just makes your story silly to have tonks of all people do this
That just doesnt make sense. imagine the clan kids not getting trained
Does he need to do this with each coin? How many does he have
To clarify this isnt his universe just one of many connected to his realm?
I somehow doubt you feel the same way to jiraiya
Is he gonna become father?
So is it constant reincarnation?
Why are you writing a ff for one piece then?
Not worth at all.