Comments of chapter undefined of I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
Dagon_vcg
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Honestly it seemed a bit forced to me, the fact that the mc was so useless was disappointing, all those fights and training seemed to be for nothing. the interaction between him and marcy was very poor
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Dagon_vcg
well obviously i dont like this chap, nothing too crazy tough, i see what the author try to do, so let me explain why i dont like it. 1) marceline basically humilliate Mc after all he did for her, yes i understand why marceline was mad, and i understand that mc did some wrong, but is Not So bad as you made it look!! is not like if Blanche has cheated on her or anything in that matter that she cant forgive and blanche need to sacrifice and suffer for months or years to be forgiven by her. If you look at it in a Logical POV, this was the best desicion blanche has made. First of all marceline did have a safe infancy and teenagehood, not only she was safe, but she also avoid hundreds of years filled with drama with her father, now she learned how to love her father, something that was good for her after she lost her mother, More importantly, thx to her father she became Waaayyy too OP than canon in just 7 years, i m not mad for her being stronger than Blanche, she is a demi devil god, its obvious that she will get broken than Blanche thx to her being 7 years training hard with the motivation to beat up Blanche, another reason of Why Mc's choice was the Best for both of them. what i dont like is how you made this look like a unforgiveable Sin. Is not, he made a mistake? kinda, its true he didnt trust her in that hurt her, nobody deny that, but at the end this was better than her joining mc, she couldnt became so powerfull if she didnt trained hard in night O Sphere with her father learning and controling all her demon heritage, she coudlnt became that strong if she wasnt spoiled with OP souls deliver from her OP father, blanche wouldnt be so OP if he didnt train without distractions, and she did face danger if she joined MC, so at the end blanche did the best call.
Liked the fear admitting part, Idk if you watched RWBY but one of the main characters that I picture as an older version of Blanche actually had a speech about fear. Idk if you would involve it but who knows, in future chapters way into blanches future I feel like that speech would work very well. (Just look up Ozpins fear speech rwby if you’re curious)
