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  • Zero616
    Zero6166d
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    Ch 4 Revelations and Transformation
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    Fate/DC Universe
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  • Zero616
    Zero6166d
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    I hate his sister, it's unbearable

    Ch 12 no name
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    Argonaut Danmachi the Early Days
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  • Zero616
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    I like Pamela, but I have to admit that I would like a supergirl, it would be fun and would keep him connected to the league, very good story, keep it up

    Ch 6 Killing an Untitled and savior of a beauty
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    All Caste Jason Todd in HP
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  • Zero616
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    It could be like that, personally I don't think so, but considering that he can still use infinity, when things touch in reality they don't, the atoms don't do it and since the sixeyes could control the energy at that level he can create an infinity barrier of that size

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 : Zabuza Momochi
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    Naruto with Curse Techniques
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  • Zero616
    Zero61617d
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    Naruto defended himself against Amaterazu with a layer of chakra, and he also thought about how Jogo didn't do anything to him, that means that the heat doesn't reach Gojo, so it wouldn't do anything to him.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 : Zabuza Momochi
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    Naruto with Curse Techniques
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  • Zero616
    Zero6161mth
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    Could you do something, Mikami the Ghostbusters was a pretty old anime that would fit perfectly.

    Ch 4 Fighting Hakari
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    Yuta Okkotsu
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  • Zero616
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    I like it a lot, thanks for the chapter, maybe for his chakra problem he can use some things from the movies, like the helel stone (I think that's its name), there is an armor that absorbs vitality, I think it would be fun to send the mc to these missions, plus they would help him a lot, another thing would be to give him a wind nature and omit the sukuna technique, using the cutting property he has, that added to his shadows would be a good combination, good luck and I wish you the best

    Ch 30 A War We Don't Belong In - Chapter 4: Collapse
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    Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    Minato uzumaki hahaha, his last name is namikaze, unless it's an AU

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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    Megumi's mother's last name is fushiguro, it is the name that Toji adopted, I don't know if the author doesn't care or didn't read these details, maybe it's because it is an AU, there is a lot that doesn't make sense, the chapters are every time heavier, there is very little information, honestly it is increasingly annoying

    Ch 30 Chapter 30
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    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    So much hope for nothing, why not give him the ten shadows technique like this, change it a little with the interaction of the chakra, such as reviving shikigami, being able to function them at will (mahoraga with the rabbit and allowing them to multiply and adapt) or being able to use the same His powers, not only do you nerf him, but you nerf the character, he has 200 IQ for God's sake and the worst of all is Mahoraga, trying to tame him is the most entertaining part, what crazy idea does the MC come up with to do it, I hope he improves , because everything so far is disappointing

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 : 10 Shadow Technique
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    Naruto The Shadow King
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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    I could talk to Tsunade and tell him that he is going to go with Orochimaru, learn from him and then kill him, pretend that he is a traitor and thus also motivate others, I say it could be an option

    Ch 3 3. Sasuke Uchiha vs The Sound Four
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    Sasuke : The Uchiha Prodigy
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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    The eye ability could be those of MHA's new order quirk, I think he can only give two orders at most (you could change that, maybe the more the more orders he can use), a useful order would be that the MS cannot be blinded or that his eyes do not deteriorate (you could make an order for him to evolve without another MS but I think it would be boring), so for the moment whenever he uses MS he must use that order and the other one he can use to train, for example, my ability to learning to multiply by 10 or my body is capable of healing itself or it can absorb natural energy without consequences, the possibilities are endless

    Ch 1 1: The Shinobi World
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    Sasuke : The Uchiha Prodigy
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  • Zero616
    Zero6162mth
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    How many stones do you have to reach for you to upload another chapter?

    Ch 41 Chapter 41
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    Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
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  • Zero616
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    I feel that you are dragging on unnecessarily, the interactions and dialogues between characters have to improve (there are times when I don't know who is speaking, it is a little confusing), the thoughts and internal reflections seem very good to me, I think you understood Toji very well, but I think that Zoro lacks a little maturity and seriousness that characterizes him, the fic is very good so far, I'm not saying that to bother, just an observation that can help, thank you and keep it up

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
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  • Zero616
    Zero6163mth
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    Boring, sooooooo boring

    Ch 31 THE CHALLENGE OF DECEPTION
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    My Name Is Kurapika
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  • Zero616
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    So he could create a token generator? For example, one that generates one a year and then improves it, then he doesn't have to worry about finding sorcerers, and he could also remove techniques from curses? Mahito's technique seems like a good idea to me, very good for his time at the coliseum

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    Zero6163mth
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    Ch 3 Freya
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    已删除的故事
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  • Zero616
    Zero6163mth
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    camie utsushimi, I know she's not in the options but she seems like a rarely used character with an interesting quirk, the mc could help her be aizen from bnha, harden her illusions, she has the potential to be op, if it bothers you that she's not in the class, you could justify yourself with the butterfly effect

    Ch 5 Choose the heroine
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    Limitless: An MHA Fanfic
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  • Zero616
    Zero6163mth
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    Por fin una historia de itadori, tiene un desarrollo realista dentro del mundo de jjk, esta muy bien escrito y es muy entretenida de leer. Gracias autor

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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Butterfly effect.
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  • Zero616
    Zero6164mth
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    An amazing chapter, keep it up

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Let's change things #1
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Butterfly effect.
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