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I read this then read the next line saw your comment came back to like this xD
The story is all over the place and doesn’t really flow that well he becomes way to op for no good reason if if there was more development with it too make it flow better I would have given this a better ratinng. Story wise it’s a good idea but your not really executing it well for example at any point in the story there is a conflict you resort to mind raping people (the doctor, kiwi). the characters need more emotion literally just npcs.
Honestly that's a stupid reason its your story ...
I almost missed out on the rest of the story lucky I read the authors note
The story at first seems to have a good concept but as you continue to read you find it starts to get stale there’s no real goal other then “hey i want to get stonger for justices”
Isn't this just the same as Fluer?
Called it
Hey not really a manga suggestio but a voteing sugges tion instead of having us do +1 make a comment in the comme nts and go by the likes on ur comment makes it fair
The story was interesting then i read that he gives away 70% of the profits to goblins No one I mean NO one in there right mind would give more then half of there profits for little to no benifts