nice, even if he is not ready for that yet, you can make ramona do it before mc to make him comfortable with public gestures, also from time to time a romance chapter with them just dating and interacting would be good, Also maybe do something like ramona jealous because mc is hot and powerful i mean he has 30 of Charisma now, if he was a little handsome before he should be handsome by now, i just thought it would be funny to see ramona using her hammer with other girls that approach to mc xDD

As long as there is not another romantic partner im good, having a threesome with lets say Kim or any other scott pilgrim character its not bad if its only one or 2 times, but as long as they remain as a couple im Ok, BTW Love how they became a power couple, they should create a adventure group for them and have a fun power couple name. BTW please remember to make them give eachother lovely nicknames: like ''Babe'' ''honey''''love'' this small details add up in their relationship and its esay for us and other to see they are closer

Another worry is DxD, i hope you dont make this a harem, or give mc another woman, we are just Ok with Ramona, this is one of the rare single love interest novel i have, please dont make it a harem

Love the fact that mc is taing Ramona with him, she can get powers from this and get stronger, that way they could be a power couple, My only little concern is the fact they dont give eachothers nickames, like ''love'', ''babe'' stuff like that, they would look more like a couple if they did this kind of stuff

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im asking because so far he is following the same route of mark did in romance, i just wanted to know because if its romance then its pointless to have amber since her sh*tty friends sabotage her relationship with mark to date some assh*le guy that later on was abusive, all of this because mark was too busy with his superhero life, unless mc gives her a geldarian suit(tech jacket) that will give her eternal youth and boost her, i don't see how a relationship with her can work. so if its a single love interest i already know he will broke up with her eventually, but if its a harem that probably wont happen

oh i tought you said until 28 chap, sorry that's my bad xD

yeah really good

Its a 80.000x multiplayer if im correct

Man cant wait to meet tali, shepard and liara xd have to bee patient!!

normally i would object about mc being super saiyan god so soon, but then i remember mc's ki is already divine, so it make sense he can achieve this transformation, after all super saiyan god Its simply a Base Saiyan that Turned into a god.

love it, keep the good work

love it

sorry bro, not personal since you fic its one of my top 5 right now, i just don't re read chaps, specially that many chaps

Im not saying he should take her now, but after a phew months (in which he should train her) mc can take her with him and later on scott and others. BTW a small detail but when interacting you should make mc and ramona give themselves nicknames like: ''love'',''honey'' or ''babe'' sure they are not in the point of love each other but that doesn't mean they don't like each other and at this point they should be using them.

you ased us to reread 28 chaps and i simply wont reread that again, i have too many chaps from other novels to read just to reread a few of your chaps, i will learn the changes from future chaps

nah too lazy for that bro i have a lot of chaps from other fics to read i never reread :/

love it

As for the worlds, hmm Konosuba sounds like the perfect 1 option, its a perfect world for mc and ramona to get powers enjoy a isekai adventure and don't be so serious about the plot, after this world maybe go with resident evil, and keep with avatar last airbender, Mc is too Op for Avatar world he wont be doing anything, unless you are planning to send mc alone first then go to avatar, let mc go nuclear and comeback, then bring Ramona and maybe scott and others to Konosuba