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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn6h
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali

    Now the whole dynamic has changed with mc, not only the idea of paralel universe being known by everyone (since there is no reason to hide it) but the idea of a more militarazed omnitrix, can imagine people going after mc to either test him/steal the nemetrix. Next chapter mc and jen should made a post on jen's social media explaining the whole situation, mc creating his own spcial media here (since he has to be present in this universe now even more than his own) and just see the chaos while they enjoy quality time xd, man cant wait for the next chap

    Ch 51 CH 49: Alistair VS Jen
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
    Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn6h
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali

    But seriously seeing this two universes interact would be epic, of course for now im more interested in seeing mc's impact on jen's universe, since Zed's nemetrix hasnt showed up and by now im sure mc is on the news/internet/extranet by now, i can imagine that while all of this happend, there is a havoc not only on earth but on the rest of the galactic comunity, since a new omnitrix user is found, im honestly surpriaed the plumbers high bosses hasnt showed up yet to interrogate mc.

    Ch 51 CH 49: Alistair VS Jen
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn7h
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    So epic bro, really like where this is going, right now it would be good for mc to slow down and take his time after he destroy yggdrassil, enjoy the teatre he will had with the new world habitants reacting to this whole mess and add new angels to his harem repertoire, also it would be good to see the reaction of people once they realize devote mortals can become angels like Neia, enri, etc.

    Ch 83 Ein Sof
    Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn9h
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    Ok first of all epic chapter, really love mc's flex and the fight/flirt they are having, So my guess from the fact that Kevina and Ken are still hanging out with Jen, but she has the ben 10 omniverse clothes, i will say we are a few days before episode one of ben 10 omniverse or Jen 10 omniverse in this case. I recommend you to later on make both Alistair and Jen's Universes interact more, not only make mc be known in jen's Universe as her interdimensional boyfriend, but also make Jen appear in alistair's universe. not only the impact of a new omnitrix user from other universe dating Jen 10 is great but for example seeing fem vilgax meet male vilgax and decide to marry because they know no one is better for them than them xd, seeing people of both universes connect until they fuse or permanently got connected it would be awesome and interesting to read, think about it bro

    Ch 51 CH 49: Alistair VS Jen
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
    Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn9h
    Replied to TERMINALLY_ILL

    they are already dating xd

    Ch 51 CH 49: Alistair VS Jen
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn14h
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali

    Gigachad is proud of you author

    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to Binge_Reader69
    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali
    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali

    You have my sword

    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
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    Really loved the chapter xD specially because it totally make sense, for jen is already too dificult to have a boyfriend, and her prospects wont get better with her future daugther forcing her to date the furry guy, the alien elastic guy that will cheat on her, the asian tennis guy that although it seems like a good boyfriend, he simply doesnt belong to that world, the 2 alien princes that wants to marry her to use her for conquer, MC ita basically so perfect for her, she felt the urgy to marry him, which its normal due to 1)how much demand mc has AND will have 2)he lives in a whole diferent universe, she had to take her chance

    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
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    Don't listen to those harem sect comments author, this is perfect, Charmcaster hasn't even showed up and like you said yourself, she requires a lot of time to solve her daddy issues and It's simply not worth it, it's not like Jen doesn't have her own inner demons. Please don't regret this chapter or try to make this a harem, i can feel you slipping, please don't give up to the harem sect pressure, this is perfect just like it is

    Ch 50 CH 48: Sudden Development
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    Dont know what and this happends randomnly, dont know why though xd

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    Your last comment was deleted

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn1d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    Im not against infinkte edwards but only if not all of them are in mc's world visit, since it would lose the point to see mc create a name fothimself there, actually it might even be bad for mc since the enemies of edwatd kenway will point him and ramona and he wouldnt noticed or be sttobg enough to defend aginst the embush

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    Exactly, i think its better not to do that, because then it would be boring aince we wont be able to see mc create a name for hkmself in those worlds

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    I dont care a lot about knifes and young neil, i just didnt want her to be kick out if the group once they broke up. Im more worried about KimxScott, lets be honest without Ramona, kim is the best replace Scott has for a soulmate, right now and with mcs ilussion magic scott can grow for better and date kim, he is not the kid he was before.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    I just rather if mc is the one that get famous across those worlds and buikd a name for himself, having a cyberpunk edward that is already well known will kinda make the trip boring.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Replied to Alucard_7894

    Hmm i dont know about mc meeting cyberpunk edward, when i thiught about infinite edwards i thought more bout diferent scott vs the world edwards, the original edwards that didnt die and got another person transmigrated, thats what i meant about og timeline, the prime scottvstheworld universe where everything happend like canon

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Commented

    As for the Infinite Edwards, well im okay with that BUT only if you make Edward being the strongest one among them, of course the singularity path its also easier, but im okay with anything as long as mc stands out. Also the idea of MC going to OG scottVstheworld timeline is interesting.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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  • daniel_rahn
    daniel_rahn2d
    Commented

    Wow okay a lot of things to comment, first of all epic chapter the interactions were great and the romance was perfect, glad you choose that song, personally it fits perfectly with ramona, and seeing how they naturally evolve their relationship by moving in together its just perfect. Next Step would be marry, but its too soon right now, maybe after 2 or 3 years top, considering how good they are for one another. Also love the pairings ScottxKim, maybe you can even do a Juliexstephen and NeilxKnifes after this.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 unexpected and expected
    In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_7894
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