Lo malo cuando creas un personaje de corazón de oro es cuando los autores lo hacen pasar por el camino de la traición y luego perdonan a sus traidores o a los que lo lastimaron o peor, hasta ahora las cosas no han ido tan lejos, pero si la gente de Menagerie sigue presionando esto después de todo lo que MC ha hecho por ellos, entonces en ese caso espero que hagas que Jaune les quite sus cosas y sus regalos y no los perdone, incluso por el amor de Blake. Thats all i ask please

Seriously i hope this doesnt follow the typical betray script,because if it does then it doesnt make sense for mc to forgive them and keep helping them, i just hope this doesnt go beyond a desperate attempt to kill jaune that will fail and cost sienna everything, because if this becames a type of spiderman martyr arc for jaune that will end up with menagerie hurting jaune so much they wont be able to compensate never. Really hope what you are doing bro, we all love the idea of a op menagerie and another force against salem but this level of stupidity when they were about to reach equlity ist almost unforgivable, for now nothing serious happend but i doubt we will be the same if this escalate more and jaune is not SERIOUSLY recompensated for this

Thx for the awesome chap, cant wait to see more

Of course man im not saying this needs to happen now, but since its obvious we will get there in one point i thiught that would be exactly what azula will do to get more of her situation, its not needed this to marry to try out the idea i gave you

With that she could marry mc as an excuse to consolidate her power and basically paviment a path to world domination without war and also putting ang in chekmate, since the situation would be so delicate in general he wont be able to do anything to protest at all

Absolutely epic would love to see more about gojo and azula, specially for azula, by the time she became lady fire she could present mc to the elemental nations, explain the people about mc being a hugh rank noble from a big empire that extend to the stars and beyond and that also has 1 or maybe more worlds under his control, explain the aura masters and basically use mc and the empire of his universe as a contrmeassure for the avatar who will surely try to put his nose where it doesnt bellow. Shouldnt be so hard due to understand if explained well, after all avatar people are advanced enough to understand the idea, specially with proofs.

Love the chap more curious to see how mc and lilith's relationship develope later in, BTW if you are bored of bordlerlands or dont know what to do once the plot is done you should totally go to other universes, like star wars or star trek maybe even twilight, etc. Other fun worlds and see the adventures of mcs team and hoe other universes react to them, BTW this is not to add other girls love the idea of lilith being the only love interest, no need of other girls

Wow such an epic cobcept of a universe a lot of us wants to see and really well developed, just hope this doesnt drop later on like most of the winx novels here, IM ROOTING FOR YOU MAN!!!! please keep this up!!!

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Honestly if it is between a harem and caulifla then stick with caulifla, is really boring to see another harem dragonball story, being one of the phew dragonball fics with only one love interest will really make your novel stand out from others, people are looking for those rare gems btween a sea of endless harem. But if you want kale too because she is important, then you can add her too and later on fuse them as kefla permanently. Adding vados is really cliche believe it or not and has been done a lot, also not necesary

Im capable the thing is my situation is not stable right now so i cant afford that yet, but if everything goes well i wouldnt mind donating a few dolars from time to time if you keep updating

The chap is over all good the interactipons are ok, and love the name btw, big fan of skyrim too, now mc only needs to teach them about ki and some techniques specially the ki hide skill, that way and with the gravity room he can earn the respect and admitration of other saiyans. BTW bro i wanted to ask you caulifla is the only love interest, or you plan to fuse her permanently with kale so kefla became the single love interest?

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The chapter was absolutely perfect i really enjoyed mc first trip in the empire and love his progress, next chapter please show us the reactions of the chat group to mcs photos, keep the good work and thx for the long chap :D

Love it bro, although i would suggest you to describe a little bit more their positions, you kinda skipped the process and give us a resume of them doing it in diferent positions, dont need to be so descriptive just show us the process while they are on it and the move on. But overall love this focus and love lilith is the single love interest. Keep the good work

So i wanted to ask can we make fionna the Single love interest?

No ignore those fanboys in the comments it doenst make sense for mc to have ssj 4, no possible explanation unless you use the dragonballs to make mc able to turn into ssj4 without a tail

The thing is he doesnt know so he wont enjoy the victory as he should

He is ok as he is, not all novels need to be anime shonens with progression og strenght, specially when most of the time feels forced