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Otaku_Gamer_00007

Otaku_Gamer_00007

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2022-05-07 JoinedAntarctica
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000710h
    Commented

    can you shut up with the stats man they mean nothing

    Ch 5 Leveling Up
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000711h
    Posted

    bro even MTLs of the most racist Chinese shits are better then this i Don't have a Problem with MLP it's about the story or the lack of story he has written plot points with no explanation or a story it's feels 100% written by AI you have to be 5 years old to find anything interesting in this and if you Do feel a lot of shame

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    my new life of magic
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000711h
    Commented

    bruh what was this so short and nothing was in it its so bad its so stupid to its like writing a story and the entire story is told by the narrator like: "then the hero marched forward with his new army and sword to kill the evil Dragon and with his holy sword noting was impossible so they succeeded and the hero claimed the Dragons heart and won the heart of the princess and they loved each other and lived happily" THE END

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A New Beginning
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    my new life of magic
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000071d
    Posted

    the very moment that magic Bitch the Bald head stupid Bitch showed up i Dropped it fuck it

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    Shigaraki in Marvel
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000073d
    Posted

    so tired of this fucking plot where the MC just goes to learn magic so retarted fuck you it's like every fanfic now Ancient one is not that big of a Deal in Marvel stories why the fuck you have to put him in there why can't we just have a normal plot progression everything is a confidence and convinent fucking garbage magic

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    All New Sunspot (Marvel)
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000073d
    Commented

    kinda stupid i hope it won't end up in a fight with X men in a Day or him falling for jean she is a cum-dumbster for the entire universe plus you are making his powers to convinent add some friction to the story God Dame bro you are writing words with no much meaning plus he is to nive and childish so make sure his character grows

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Training
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    All New Sunspot (Marvel)
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000074d
    Replied to Fickle_as_light

    God speed then soilder i almost fell Down the MLT root but I cared about my braincells and i hate racist Chinese so I am safe but i hope you get better if you have nothing to read then read warhammer 40k it has 400+ Official novels but Don't worry it won't be more then 15 million words and that's light work for a fanfic addict and my brainrot is in My little pony fanfics so I will not judge

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Human or Monster?
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    Marvel: I'm not Spider-Man, I'm Xenomorph-Infested!
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000074d
    Replied to Fickle_as_light

    at what point it's an attack on your human intelligence

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Human or Monster?
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000074d
    Replied to Fickle_as_light

    would still not make sense to be that sloppy

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Human or Monster?
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    Marvel: I'm not Spider-Man, I'm Xenomorph-Infested!
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000710d
    Commented

    Dame bro if they kiss I would have Died that's pure Bromance right there

    Ch 19 Volume I - Chapter 18: First Steps of Friendship
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    The Extra of The Lunerra
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000712d
    Posted

    written very poorly it feels childish and Dumb makes no sense like just read the aunt mays response it makes no sense and there was a lack of scene and how it happened the characters are so one Dimensional it's painful it feels like a translation or writting by a child who can make a story in his head but can't write it out

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    Spider Man: Web of Destiny
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000718d
    Replied to Try_hard

    atleast make the sex scenes better

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    I am Morty Sanchez
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000719d
    Posted

    cheap smut power fantasy no real Brain behind it don't even make sense uses stupid excuses but it is what it is

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    I am Morty Sanchez
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000719d
    Posted

    i still Don't like the smut and NSFW because I think you can write a good plot and it's a waste of time to write smut

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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000719d
    Commented

    i Think this Smut was ok but Don't kill your MCs character over it Don't make him a scum i honestly Don't want the NSFW I want the plot

    Ch 11 11: Existentialism
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000721d
    Commented

    please no NSFW just plot 馃槶

    Ch 10 10: From another world
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    Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_0000723d
    Posted

    I love this it was short but really good

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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000071mth
    Commented

    what are you on about why will he have the mind stone and if he has that already he Does not need more power to rule Asgard plus Thanos had it in the original and gave it to Loki while mind controlling him plus if it's MCU loki loves Thor bruh what in the garbage mess is this story

    Ch 9 Loki 2
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    Thor God Of Thunder
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000071mth
    Commented

    wait there is no explanation about what is happening and why

    Ch 2 (The training session.)
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    Marvel: I am Zoom.
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  • Otaku_Gamer_00007
    Otaku_Gamer_000071mth
    Replied to Lonely_Translator

    English is also not my first language It's my 3rd language i learned on my own just from watching American YouTube so you have a skill issue

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Libary and Magic
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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