Member of Hand ??? HuH they where thugs not ninjas plus i Don't think police is good enough to know if it's hand that's more on Shield stuff

ok the author said there will be smut most of the story even he put it in tag his first chapter author note what are you incapable of not getting it that he will write smut and it will be just a mery sue strong guy who fucks bitches and pretend it's some gospel of God stfu

you must ignore every street sign this what a retard

40% will be plot 60% smut and where Do i got this number from I wonder lil bro go lick salt and get high

why not 😭

oh my a Blind person can't read authors note or tags what Do i do are you illetrate or something poor baby

oh it's a smut fic i Dont want a smut garbage fic i wanted a normal fic but my Day is ruined

bro is slow even some fanfics release more chapters then you I love it and all i want is to read more of it as i have not much to read 😭

to much info Dump

oh so many chapters and they are all so fun it's like an episode of a Morning cartoon I love it keep it up hope cosmo gets her Body back i Don't know her character much but she looks fun

asmongold Oh no !

MORE MORE MORE I WANT MORE REEEEEEEEEEEE

that so Mather Ogawaay of him lol 😂 bet he will say that if that happened

i was looking for something to read for 2 Days and finally I found something good i would like if there was so Smut or spicy happing here and there but it's was fun I was lost in the pony for an hour atleast write more

I will read it 😅 but I am a little Burnt out of it like it's so power fantasy can he copy the Other SSS rank skill or not of that necromancer plus story is very predictable like and the chapters feel short or streached like filler the whole elemental bunny thing and some other parts i Don't know why you do that as the story has so much potential

this novel is good but after you read like 250 plus chapters it gets a little boring like it's relative 😔 like till ch 250 all the enemy's who have fought mc where so weak compared to the MC that it was a joke plus they all have the same reaction to his power like oh i can't Believe my eyes or no that was a fluke it happened to many times

surtur is weak without his Ethernal flames bruh and it's writting like a childs stroy book "And then princess and Prince lived happily ever after and the kingdom prospered" bruh

this is so ChatGPT man 😞

you should have made him punch ✊👊 the hammer like that one comic until his fists bleed and he masters his powers in a hard fight

Batman saying what in god's name is unnecessary he is not the only to waste words and get angry