I will have not given this story one star not for author being a DUMBASS retard the story is fucking stupid and has very unnatural stupid characters and a lot of stupid plot hole and the most stupid shit everything just falls in MC lap from the sky that's so Bullshit and the pussy bitch author will Delete this I am sure because he can't take any heat for the Logs of shit he has pushed out in the form of a story

WOMP WOMP looser hope you never make money so You Die of hunger with that stupid attitude

I hate the original man this is just better then the original

i need more but i Don't like Harem man and this story will be so good if he is like superman with one partner and not a Scum like man just Do this superhero stuff I just Don't see the need for Romance and stuff in there you can have so much plot and write fun stuff but you will be stuck wasting your time and words on Random women and mid love story just focus on the good hero stuff man sigh

well i hope this does not get Dropped I like invensible Fanfics but i Don't know how Krypton will fit into this and will there be kryptonite bullshit here to like man superman is a god but he Does not have the codex so maybe find that

man explore speed force more that power is so Busted 😭

this novel is literally like copied Shadow slave even the cast and there Dinamic is so similar like bro come on man but shadow slave is so good that even it copy is good I hope it will keep going to but man o man it's so similar

suck a Fucking Dick this story is not about Flash and his powers alone you had to ruin it with system Garbage shit oh 😱 let's give one of the most OP Character in existence even more OP powers like just explore his speed you will not need other powers plus having the meta knowledge was already enough and Flash only looses in comic because of Bullshit Comic plot so you much be some stupid looser who thinks powers = means good plot suck a Dick

just an other system garbage 😒 like just kys

well one of the most important thing in a story is there should be a Story first of all, being a Author is a Hard task and making the shit up is not easy but this author has written a lot but there is noting serious or world Building about it so in shot the most important thing is the vibe yes vibe and tone of the story and the world building and how well it can Make people give a fuck about it characters are really important but not that much if the story itself is not good a lot of Authors focus to much on the characters and fight scene should not be to long and nither to many .

I wanted to give this a perfect score but the story is stretched a lot and MC is very one Dimension in a way and it feels like he is still in training ark 😭 after 500+ chapters and he is going from School ark to bigger school ark where he will now meet other APEX kids and he will have to train more like when will the training ark ends and some real impacrtful story Begins this is why i like Shadow slave there is no training ark just Fight tooth and nail and Survive in between

yuko is not a Bear she is a cow

this is sooo much better then Dimensional Decent this Does not feel hollow characters feel human finally

inspired from shadow slave great 😃👍

very hot 🥵

can you shut up with the stats man they mean nothing

bro even MTLs of the most racist Chinese shits are better then this i Don't have a Problem with MLP it's about the story or the lack of story he has written plot points with no explanation or a story it's feels 100% written by AI you have to be 5 years old to find anything interesting in this and if you Do feel a lot of shame

bruh what was this so short and nothing was in it its so bad its so stupid to its like writing a story and the entire story is told by the narrator like: "then the hero marched forward with his new army and sword to kill the evil Dragon and with his holy sword noting was impossible so they succeeded and the hero claimed the Dragons heart and won the heart of the princess and they loved each other and lived happily" THE END

the very moment that magic Bitch the Bald head stupid Bitch showed up i Dropped it fuck it

so tired of this fucking plot where the MC just goes to learn magic so retarted fuck you it's like every fanfic now Ancient one is not that big of a Deal in Marvel stories why the fuck you have to put him in there why can't we just have a normal plot progression everything is a confidence and convinent fucking garbage magic