Comments of chapter undefined of The Innkeeper

Really, going with the secret orphan of a powerful family? At least,I don’t recall you mentioning any family members for Lex earlier.

The past two chapters were utter trash. What a waste of time.

I feel like ppl are put off (me included) from the abrupt transitions happening on the novel. from mc living in regular earth, to actually having cultivators, and then literally right after his parents turn out to be from other dimensions as well. it's just to sudden

bro what the f- is this novel and why is it so well written? im hooked!

early? man said early?!? a little criticism, I'm no expert but it's late man, no mention of family then this all of a sudden it's just one thing popping out of no where after another, reading so many big revelations that come out of nowhere is painful for me couldn't this have been hinted to with his family being mentioned earlier? like just one sentence so we get the idea of his family being mysterious and a hint that earth has cultivators that would make this far easier to read for me and a lot of other people but for many and myself with all this coming out of no where it demotivates continuing heavily Imma wait a few chapters to see if I will continue because you had an interesting idea at the start

If they had such a powerful cultivation family why didn't they help him cultivate? Perhaps he didn't have the qualifications?

I actually like it. I know it's a common trope where a member of the family is actually a hidden expert from some kind of higher realm, but as long as it's handled well im all for it. I thinks tropes are often just handled poorly due to laziness or just not being very creative. If done right tropes can still be really interesting and fun to read. The story thus far has been great so I have faith it'll be handled well.

Wow. Author just a tip but saying something isnt cliche doesn’t make it not cliche. This is a super low quality cliche/trope. Perhaps you have grand plans which required this. Maybe they are interesting. But I still think it’s a mistake… a super cliche Avenue to something unique is still poor writing that will turn off readers before they get to the unique interesting parts. I will keep reading because there are already 600 chapters out and it’s fairly well reviewed (not that a lot of well reviewed novels on here still aren’t trash but I’ll give it a shot). However to be honest if I was reading this when it was new and less chapters were out I almost definitely would of dropped it at this chapter…

Thanks for the chap

dropped.

I like revenge plots

I will continue for now. Thank you for the chapter ☺️

Wow, what are the surprise waiting for the readers🥰🤩

Thanks for the chapters 🤠🐱

The writing style is smooth and the premise is building quite some interest in me . Appreciate the work man .

This chapter made lot things sour for me.😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

The tumor is humor

Well, the coincidence is too much that is seems cliché...if it's system doing I can get that it can sense those but it's purely coincidence...well the story seems interesting though

thx for the chapter 😻