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Arkage

Arkage

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I devour good books. Grew tired of cultivation novels as they are all the same. So if a story introduces cultivators of the Wuxia/Xianxia style it gets dropped.

2018-10-28 JoinedCanada
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    Chapter 20 PAYWALL! NO! BAD AUTHOR! Your story is basically a magazine blurb / synopsis. 20 chaps is nothing in an actual novel! Do the math on the chapter unlocks! Please AT LEAST hit chapter 40 before doing this!

    Ch 19 Ryker, my hubby~~
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    I Want Mechas, Not Wives!
    Fantasy · Stylish_Demon
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    .... is this a well fleshed out world?!... I'm shocked!.Maybe a story worth some coins!? Please dont be too greedy. I feel that AT LEAST 40 chps are needed before going premium. Also check out royal road and am4zon and 4udible before c0ntracting. (sorry for the weird spelling. W N might sensor this)

    Ch 18 Reibunhāsuto
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    I Want Mechas, Not Wives!
    Fantasy · Stylish_Demon
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    Ha good so far. A good time waster. I dont mean that negatively, sometimes this is what we want

    Ch 7 The Hero Act
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    I Want Mechas, Not Wives!
    Fantasy · Stylish_Demon
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Replied to KingRetto

    bo he doesnt

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    Lewd Apocalypse
    Sci-fi · thegrandmagi
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    Have a stone. Let's see where this goes. I have been so disappointed lately.Maybe I'm getting picky after wading through so much dross....

    Ch 3 I want the QUANTUM PULSE RIFLE!
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    I Want Mechas, Not Wives!
    Fantasy · Stylish_Demon
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    Author comments in the author comment box maybe..... Also longer chapters or more substance/ story. There are too many info dump chapters. Also there is a chapter 20 paywall incoming. Mr.Author I will not critisize too harshly, but there is not enough solid story content to justify paying for your story so soon. Please look at your story and think hard if it is worth paying for at chapter 20. Thank you for sharing your story though.

    Ch 14 WIND BREATHING SKILL
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    Inside my favorite novel
    Fantasy · CAESAR20
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Replied to KingValos

    Chapter 20 paywall incoming?.......

    Ch 13 EXAMINATION SKILL ANF THE PILL
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    Inside my favorite novel
    Fantasy · CAESAR20
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented
    Ch 13 EXAMINATION SKILL ANF THE PILL
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    Inside my favorite novel
    Fantasy · CAESAR20
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented
    Ch 12 MASASHI MASAMURA'S PAST
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    Inside my favorite novel
    Fantasy · CAESAR20
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  • Arkage
    Arkage13d
    Commented

    comment +1

    Ch 8 RYOSHI ART AND THE OLD MAN (1)
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    Inside my favorite novel
    Fantasy · CAESAR20
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Posted

    Made it to chapter 25 and had to stop. The MC is unbelievably pathetic, and I do mean Unbelievable. Also inconsistent. Way too much Rom-Com/ Slice of life filler chapters too early imo.

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    Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!
    Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Posted

    The synopsis seems to be misleadingly vague. I thought it would be OP mc smashing cultivators with modern weapons, which I would enjoy immensely, but no. This is another dumb cultivation novel. I feel I wasted my time after coming back and looking for something to read...

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    Bombarding Cultivators with Cluster Artillery
    Eastern · Desperate Lambs
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Replied to Lane

    Thanks for the heads up. Hopefully it's not too cringe

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    You were told to build a tractor, but you’re building a rocket?
    Sci-fi · Red Wine Flower
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented
    Ch 51 Chapter 51 : Shaka laka boom boom (18+)
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    Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented

    Slow is good

    Ch 39 Chapter 39 : Daily Routine
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    Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom
    Urban · PeterPan
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented

    Please no Murim or cultivation!!!! Just a few magic weapons too...

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 : Help Me...!?
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    Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom
    Urban · PeterPan
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented

    Also a chapter 22 pay wall.... Webnovel started that and authors slowly started doing the same.

    Ch 21 A Lying Lips{Edited}
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    Villainous Me: Help! The heroines are yanderes!
    Fantasy · Secretly_A_Villian
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented

    Noping out of here. The reason he gave the elf is SOOOO DUMB. Just say you were trying to deceive the bandits. I find I'm just skimming the chapters now.

    Ch 21 A Lying Lips{Edited}
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    Villainous Me: Help! The heroines are yanderes!
    Fantasy · Secretly_A_Villian
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  • Arkage
    Arkage1mth
    Commented

    Gets kind of boring how fearful he is. Then he becomes confident for no reason. He also follows random strangers or noises even though he is trying to stay away?!?! That makes zero sense, unless the reason is plot progression, which would be dumb.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Who Is She? {Edited}
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    Villainous Me: Help! The heroines are yanderes!
    Fantasy · Secretly_A_Villian
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  • Arkage
    Arkage2mth
    Commented

    Haha really enjoying this. F*** Murim. Read 1 you've read them all.

    Ch 8 Behold The Power...
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    Murim Is Cringe
    Eastern · Neonkilz
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