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.....what had she done?
so.... assuming I've got enough jade energy or whatever I could just stare at the moon and WHOOSH! It disappears into my space . isn't it ridiculous
Am I in the right place , why do these perks sound like the ones given to cultivation protags .
lack of specific information leading to a wrong conclusion
Remember! There's no guarantee she's going to awaken. He was going to buy and bunch to get atleast a few awakened.
hmm My doubts about loyalty from earlier chapter have been cleared to an extent
Why is it that the author foregoes any logic here. I mean, was it so hard to put some thought into what you are writing .
hmmm..... I'm confused here, someone who's forced to be a slave wouldn't cut your throat when they could !?? I mean , if I was a slave I wouldn't pass up on the opportunity to sabotage the people who bought me and escape from slavery. I can think of few explanations such as him not abusing them and giving the a semblance of control over their lives in order to win their loyalty but this doesn't seem like the act of our "I'll pull the trigger on anyone and everyone I'll find and then wonder why every other survivor seems to be hostile " protagaonist . Once a means to fight for their freedom is given to them they are as prone to stab you as any other survivor . I welcome any other perspective or argument to my line of thinking .
yeah right .....
This one is just fine man . Please don't make these leaps in logic too often or too big .They will ruin the story.
I can see that it's a fine work by a fine author .
.......does being in a child's body makes you thoughtless .Or do authors have moments where they kinda shut off any reason from their brain .
Appreciate that he's not going after the desperate people . Although crime is still a crime, but hey , I'm not the one in a different universe as a homeless kid . So , yeah.... can't talk about rights and wrongs while comfortably laying in a bed .
hmm, I remember reading that his in-keeper apparel makes him essentially invulnerable within the inn premises .
Am I the only one who feels the writing feels half assed...I mean a little bit of thought and it could be sooo much better .
ancient .... technology .... a bone dagger perhaps or a blow dart would do him just fine
Trying so very desperately to not change anything from the movie . I kinda understand the meaning of "puking blood in frustration" now . I'm doing it after reading this....this .... whatever the author is trying to do .