Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

Lost a lot of interest after seeing that he willingly is letting himself get beat and isn't doing a thing about it.

Why system and why do people like, it breaks any satisfaction that one gains from surpassing their limits thats why games like dark souls are so popular

I was really enjoying this too now you added a system😭. It removes all sense of realism for me

Minds eye I could get behind... But a system appearing suddenly... That was very very random! I might be saying something you must have considered but please try to get a beta... I actually think the story is good and has potential just the spelling and grammar... U know... Please keep it up! Best wishes, I'm going to read ahead now.. 🙂

Wait wut? When was the system a thing, I find that his eyes were enough of a chest already

Umm... What? System? Why now? And why at all?

Swish and flick not flip and flick.......

I'm wondering why he hasnt once at least attempted to say something like Status. At least it hadnt been mentioned.

You forgot that he dropped his broom before walking away

Good Chapter, and I like how you added the system.

All you need now is search YouTube Harry Potter and guns

SSO THE LINES SIMILAR TO THE PHONE GAME OF HARRY POTTER

Thanks for chapter

Surprise System!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story