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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

ToastyToast
ToastyToastLv2ToastyToast

Thx

Sandford_96
Sandford_96Lv5Sandford_96

Lost a lot of interest after seeing that he willingly is letting himself get beat and isn't doing a thing about it.

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Dragon_Lord_KuroII
Dragon_Lord_KuroIILv4Dragon_Lord_KuroII

Why system and why do people like, it breaks any satisfaction that one gains from surpassing their limits thats why games like dark souls are so popular

Kem_J
Kem_JLv1Kem_J

I was really enjoying this too now you added a system😭. It removes all sense of realism for me

Gorath13
Gorath13Lv4Gorath13

Minds eye I could get behind... But a system appearing suddenly... That was very very random! I might be saying something you must have considered but please try to get a beta... I actually think the story is good and has potential just the spelling and grammar... U know... Please keep it up! Best wishes, I'm going to read ahead now.. 🙂

MrWeirdo
MrWeirdoLv2MrWeirdo

Wait wut? When was the system a thing, I find that his eyes were enough of a chest already

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1asdasdssf

Umm... What? System? Why now? And why at all?

HiddenSwordsman
HiddenSwordsmanLv13HiddenSwordsman

Swish and flick not flip and flick.......

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

I'm wondering why he hasnt once at least attempted to say something like Status. At least it hadnt been mentioned.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

You forgot that he dropped his broom before walking away

Grim_Crimzon
Grim_CrimzonLv4Grim_Crimzon

Good Chapter, and I like how you added the system.

Lirg_Yob
Lirg_YobLv1Lirg_Yob

All you need now is search YouTube Harry Potter and guns

grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

SSO THE LINES SIMILAR TO THE PHONE GAME OF HARRY POTTER

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

Surprise System!

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story