Gorath13
Geek for well written SI, Rebirth, Transmigration fics, "Well Written" is the key word. Marvel, DC, HP, Naruto, PJO , ASOIAF, GOT, Avatar or crossovers of the above are my bread and butter.
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I'm imagining him smirking and saying "hey, how you doin..." lol
purple and pink..image of Ursula from little mermaid popped in my mind... lol
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wings
let's do a compromise with all the views...would 2 chapters with multiple short time skips of few months each and longer paragraphs covering anything important be cool with everyone? or we can go to X784 and have flash backs spanning a few chapters ahead ...either way we will see progress from the year X784 only after a few chapters yeah?
he is 13...he should be a powerhouse by 25...shorten the timeline for his growth please...
why won't he have the strength in six years!? why think so lowly of himself if he is getting this good in a short time...he should believe in himself more or else he is setting himself up for failure...and why isn't he eating the light!!! he should be unbeatable in the morning light!! instant mp regen dude!
I hope it's blunted đ
With his real face exposed? did kurai sensei not see Axels face at Hogwarts? she should have made the connection then itself if she knows Tristan...that makes it a plot hole...If she doesn't know Tristan Hunt then, seeing Axels real face (again) should not "shock" her and so this part of the paragraph is redundant.
othrys
weren't they married ?
u do realise "thee" (meaning "you") changes the understanding right? "the" itself is pronounced as either "tha" or "thee" but it's written as "the".
poor petunia and Vernon....the child they raised as their own... encouraging his dreams to the extent of getting a meeting with Ferguson....and they were left bound and gagged while he went away with random people....I am not blaming Alex...it's was new for him...I'm just sympathetic for the Durselys
might as well "go" out.