Comments of chapter undefined of The Marvelous Superman
The Marvelous Superman
Passerby_Venne
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Well. Even if you adamantly refused to read the source material of your own fan-fic. Just how big of Dwayne Johnson are you living under??? Even fanfic writer and their grandma knows that spidy powers come from the weaver (a multiversal entity) one simply can't ignore that titbit cause every ff author is hellbent on shoving it in reader's face. And here u r write this b.s. No shade this isn't bad. It's just an odd decision to ignore such crucial lore.
Well, MC had only surface knowledge of marvel, he had seen movies but he wasn't that deeply involved with that world. He was a DC fan. He had seen some movies but he wasn't aware of her existence, that's one of the reasons he made that reckless move. but yeah you're right, I did write that out poorly. this was my first fanfic, the ones after this got substantially better and I did learn from my mistakes. I got less and less complaints for my fanfics after this one. so if you felt like this fanfic was even slightly good, then you should read my other works!
LordAion:You're right, there really are different canonical origins for various heroes. So I'm just going to ask you one question, how does your protagonist know the origin of this Spider-Man's powers? How does he know he won't kill his own family with poison or radiation? This is a plot hole or stupidity on the part of the protagonist, which could be considered another plot hole, since he should have mental processing at a genius level among geniuses. I know that this novel is already complete and there's nothing more to do about it, but I hope you take this into consideration in your future works, if any.
it was fun at first... welp consequences... consequences, there's SILK, the INHERITORS, MADAM WEB, AGHHH MY BRAIN if it's to make them strong why don't you just wait for the falcon and the winter soldier arc, where they successfully reverse engineer the SUPER SOLDIER SERUM of DR.ERKSTINE, STEVE ROGERS the CAPTAIN AMERICA!!! WHY SPIDERMAN WHY!!!
Pues o lo es ,pero asia allá va si sigues poniendo cosas que se te ocurre a lo loco y no me malinterpretes es bueno el fic perooo le estás poniendo demasiadas cosas que nada que ves . Por ejemplo pusiste a Superman con regeneración okey es pasable por qué es un trasmigrador pero que ya cambies todo la secuencia del multiverso por gusto está feo y además solo puede haber 1 o 2 personas con poderes de Spiderman en cada universo dado que son los pilares en si de cada universo
