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Dhaliwal2

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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal247min
    Replied to Eminence_TheGreen

    Yes but Itachi did it because Uchiha clan was actively causing trouble and was planning a coup. MC did nothing of that sort. MC's family saw a piece of paper and thought it was okay to kill their own son/brother for the sake of the village without even actually consulting the leader of the village. Point is they are in ANBU and should have reported anything like this to Hokage.

    Ch 92 Chapter 92 Truth
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal27h
    Commented

    Pretty much every shinobi thinks for themselves. It was braindead move on his family's behalf. They didn't even think to consult with third Hokage who's the true leader of the village. If Danzo still survives after this then it won't be worth reading anymore. Unless he fails to kill and leave the village with killing Danzo or making konoha pay his sole mission. There has to be dire consequences for this.

    Ch 92 Chapter 92 Truth
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal22d
    Commented

    I would rather believe that his family is being controlled with curse seal than that they are all freaking stupid. Except root, other ninjas are not loyal to the point that they don't even question basic common sense.

    Ch 91 Chapter 91 Resolve
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal24d
    Commented

    The hentai didn't introduce her mother right? So can you add photos of original characters in comments?

    Ch 101 Mrs. Shinomiya
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    The Passionate Daily Life Starting from the Tachibana Family
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal26d
    Commented

    The peak of humans should be higher in GoT since it's a magical world right?

    Ch 8 Back home
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal26d
    Commented
    Ch 5 Anniversary Tourney III
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal26d
    Replied to LuminousValentine

    I have read the manhwa and both sisters are great. MC is one lucky son of a gun.

    Ch 72 Impossible opponent
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal26d
    Posted

    I did read the MTL version. The power levels are messed up. Squad Captains are only equal to Kages of 5 villages. This problem became more glaring as story went on. Yhwach and Aizen were shown to be only at the level of Hashirama and Madara.

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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal26d
    Commented

    I feel like he gonna bump into those mother and daughter a d somehow save them.

    Ch 52 Chapter 52
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    My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal213d
    Replied to Miguel_Sayjin

    Yeah he's half the reason Minato died because he stopped Uchiha clan.

    Ch 73 Chapter 73 Village
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal214d
    Commented

    Author ignore them. Yes it's a modern family fanfic but his life has already developed. Now it obviously can't revolve around the main cast only. Things are going to happen in his life. Once something personal happens then obviously Modern family cast will appear since they are all his friends. They have nothing to do with his business or career so they won't appear in those chapters. It's as simple as that. Plus that Gacha is OP.

    Ch 231 Chapter 231: Tree Network
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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal214d
    Replied to jess_weston

    Natsuha

    Ch 86 I'll walk you home
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal214d
    Commented

    What does MC actually want to do? His thought process suddenly goes 180. Like I know you said he wants to be a good guy but the way you write it comes off as sarcastic. So it just doesn't feel like a real goal. Till now, it feels like the only reason he wants to be with the girls is because he's trying to be a good guy. It feels like his personality is lacking. Like he doesn't express his desires like a normal person. His actions comes from a motivation that most readers can't relate to.

    Ch 54 You are a burden
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal214d
    Commented

    He can take his women to other world right? Will he take them to Demon slayer? Because after killing Muzan and creating a business empire there, it would be a pretty great place to live.

    Ch 53 Let's work hard!
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal215d
    Replied to Blasphemer_reader

    Because he writing it in a fast pace. Otherwise story would barely progress with chapter release speed.

    Ch 597 Allies
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal216d
    Replied to Tobi_444

    Plus borrowing some of their power and borrowing all of their power is very different. You actually made him borrow all of Four tails power. Hell let's even say that Roshi could forcibly borrow all of Four tails power, Four tails actively helping him resist Genjutsu and cooperating with in fight made no sense at all.

    Ch 49 Chapter 49 Bijudama
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal216d
    Replied to Tobi_444

    Since Tailed beasts are sealed,the jinchuriki can forcibly borrow their power. Like Mito could from Nine tails. What you are writing is literally a perfect jinchuriki. Four tails is actively helping him and cooperating with Roshi to fight. How is this any different from Killer B? We know for a fact that Killer B was the first perfect jinchuriki. This was a really important detail and you should have researched it properly.

    Ch 49 Chapter 49 Bijudama
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal216d
    Commented

    Please don't use AI much because it kinda of add useless details and break the rhythm of the story. Your own writing is much better and more realistic. AI just beautifies any or all scenes.

    Ch 48 Chapter 48 Intense Battle
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal216d
    Commented

    If breathing style really drained vitality then Urokodaki Sakonji wouldn't be alive and teaching people. Is this a head cannon you decided to add into the story?

    Ch 51 Kagaya will do everything!
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  • Dhaliwal2
    Dhaliwal216d
    Commented

    Roshi and Han could use Tailed beast's power but only forcefully. Four tails and Five tails did not actively help them. What you are showing right now is a perfect jinchuriki which only Killer B could achieve before Naruto. If Five tails helped Roshi dispell illusion that means they have already reached an understanding. That would make Roshi perfect jinchuriki. But in canon they could only borrow their power forcefully just like Mito. Mito could use Nine Tail's power but that didn't mean they had reached an understanding.

    Ch 46 Chapter 46 A Nobody
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