This is so forced....even a little bit nice, it's totally krinch and I even skipped most of the capital which is boring and unnecessary Not to mention that they haven't gone more than 6 chapters and he's already looking for a woman...it's totally disgusting

And here the forced plot begins......along with the personality change that literally did not feel like you were reading about a transmigration simply about a new character

We'll see how it goes with a depressive, self-destructive protagonist who believes that everyone owes him while he wallows in his insignificant existence along with his cowardice.

I love it...but everything tends to be a lot of filler or, to sum up, too much description for absolutely everything.

The forced relationships you're making are a bit krinch...but the rest is acceptable, except for his internal monologues

Well another loud protagonist..🤢🤮

It's the first time I read a fanfic that is ruined by the author in the first chapter 😵

Oh yes, you are in poor physical condition....😵

The plot cannot be more forced than the relationship you had with your ex😅

Fast and without any progress...plus a nerf to the character...if I was going to nerfer him like that, I better not have even given him a system

So technically I have made almost no progress at all in 8 months...ok, well what can I say is to be expected.

Hay partes muy forzadas y exageradas. ...como las conversaciones que no tienen el sentimiento natural de lo que significan

Very true....and I bet he ends up accepting the wizard and will go to the castle to learn, then feeling indebted and will protect the kingdom, while he "falls in love" with Cirila...🤦🏼‍♀️🤦🏼‍♀️🤦🏼 ♀️🤦🏼‍♀️

Has anyone else noticed the fact that the author makes him look strong and all...but when he goes to fight someone "important" to the "plot" he nerfs him stupidly and without any logic...?

So the amazing strategy that demonstrates not only the great wisdom of the protagonist but also his great intellect?... IN A FEW WORDS ACT LIKE A DOG

Does anyone else feel like they are reading but a novel about culture or about 100 Chinese version?🤨

One question... Are you going to wait until your parents leave to train or at least exercise?....😑🤦🏼‍♀️

To be in a new and technically strange world since it was a fantasy before being there....but he complains about everything and everything, God, not even my sister, the smug one, complains so much about someone's blood Animal Maybe a piece of advice...don't give extensive explanations about everything and everything, that becomes boring and like me they will skip paragraphs so as not to read something that can only be filler.

Yes in fact....not to mention that every time I read the attacks or fights of some Chinese writer, it seems like I'm reading about the Power Rangers😅🤣🤣 The loop is super infinite when they attack or do something else JAJAJAJ

Or it was just written with an AI