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Passerby_Venne

Passerby_Venne

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Me? I'm simply an insignificant reader.

2017-07-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne3d
    Replied to Wender_Quintino

    Thanks for your comment, but this was intended as a comedy first and foremost. The story doesn't get very dark nor very serious, it's mostly comedy but it has its action and adventure moments as well. if you want a mainly action story, then my Naruto one is the right one for you. if you want a drama story, then my Lion King story is for you. sorry to disappoint you.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Karen strikes again!
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne3d
    Commented

    It wasn't that Moria was weak, the problem was in the fact that Oda hadn't really gotten the hang of powers along until much later. the seven warlord are supposed to be 1/3 of the superpowers of the sea along side The emperors and marines. although they are weaker than the emperors, they weren't supposed to be that far behind. But they were introduced early in the story so they seemed much weaker compared to those introduced later. I mean, look at Crocodile, Moria and even Shanks in the early story! I would even dare to say that in the early chapters, even Garp seems very weak compared to his appearance in the later chapters. Look at Ace, he seemed weak, but it was confirmed later on that he knew all types of Haki, and his conquerors haki could shake a whole island. this problem with power scaling is a curse on all long manga, look at Naruto, Kakashi, third Hokage, Orochimaru, all of them were much, much weaker before chunnin exams and after time skip everyone got way more powerful. that's the problem. Moria probably knew Haki as he was confirmed to be Kaidos rival in their younger days. it was just that Moria was introduced too early

    comment if you think Moria was to weak.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne3d
    Replied to Wender_Quintino

    shhhh, do not use your brain, it's not good for your health!

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Triad of Heroes
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne3d
    Replied to Wizzle_Jizzle

    The dude is blind so we can't see his name always! jokes aside I forgot to mention him usually, but he does make a comeback

    Ch 32 Chapter 32: I have become a menace!!
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne3d
    Replied to Wender_Quintino

    Well, MC had only surface knowledge of marvel, he had seen movies but he wasn't that deeply involved with that world. He was a DC fan. He had seen some movies but he wasn't aware of her existence, that's one of the reasons he made that reckless move. but yeah you're right, I did write that out poorly. this was my first fanfic, the ones after this got substantially better and I did learn from my mistakes. I got less and less complaints for my fanfics after this one. so if you felt like this fanfic was even slightly good, then you should read my other works!

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Puny Parker and the spider
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne7d
    Replied to AlmightyPriest

    Okay this has to be one of the most creative and funny comments! 😅 For those that missed it, on the last paragraph where the author wrote that MC became a civil servant instead of a teacher, this dude commented the gif just below "and where did that bring you?" and then on this paragraph where the author said that MC still became a Sensei this dude commented the gif above. funny joke, 9/10 would laugh again

    What he never expected was that on his first day at work, as soon as he walked into the office, the next moment, he transmigrated and became a new sensei at the Ninja Academy.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne10d
    Posted

    This is the best TVD/TO fanfic I've read so far. MC still retains some of Klaus's personality while still showing more car soft his family. Klaus was such a fascinating character because of his ruthlessness, yet there was a hint of good in him. I would've liked to see this story start just after the mikaelsons got turned. 4.4/5 stars!

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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne10d
    Commented

    Really annoying when his title changes every two sentences. so far he's been called, admiral, vice admiral, rear admiral and colonel. And not once or twice, it has been changing every other sentence since the first chapter.

    The Rear Admiral of the Marines slowly formed a smile.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne10d
    Replied to Boxer_Vivek

    😅

    Sarabi and Mufasa were smiling, but even then, Mufasa had a glint of worry in his eyes as he looked around. He was searching for his younger brother Scar.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne13d
    Commented

    He isn't in a mountain, the correct translation would be "come out of seclusion" or "come out of hiding"

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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne13d
    Commented

    Rambo Uchiha

    "The matter has developed to such a point, it seems that I have to ask him to come out of the mountain!"
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    After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne14d
    Replied to Nyx_Alexander17

    Any day now. I've written 40 chapters for it so far.

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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne20d
    Replied to Sensei_8446

    save* but yeah, Mufasa's death is pivotal for the story development. I felt like if he survived, I would have removed one of the most important events in the life of Asafa and Simba, and the pride lands. Also, I love the sky scene, so he ahd to die!

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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne21d
    Replied to orangegummy
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne23d
    Replied to king_of_fanfic

    Thank you, I am happy since it feels like I reached my goal with what I intended for this fanfic. I wanted to take back the reader to re-experience the lion king while diving deeper into the circle of life, all the while giving the reader a "new" story. I loved the lion King when I was younger and I wanted to share that love!

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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne1mth
    Replied to bageater

    Seeing this comment still makes me laugh after 3 months. You have my type of humour!

    Don't forget to support me with powerstones-dattebayo!
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne1mth
    Replied to erebuss

    What if I identify as others? And my pronouns are their/theirs. is this story still mine or is it theirs?

    "Eh, your right, so it wasn't just rumors, our head has rizz!" a teen girl said happily.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne1mth
    Replied to erebuss

    Ye$

    Hiashi was 0utside the mansion waiting for his daughter, it didn't take long for her to hurry outside and he saw her looking down with a red face.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne1mth
    Replied to Jornamin

    Don't worry, soon there will be a timeskip and then he'll be really op. superman was kinda weak in his teenage years. he only became like the most powerful being in his prime adult years, people often forget that.

    Superman continued to increase the momentum as the fell but hulk kept fighting him. In the end Superman felt that he was losing his strength and grip, so in a last burst of power he pushed hulks trajectory towards an unhabitated place. That was the last thing he remembered before losing consciousness.
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  • Passerby_Venne
    Passerby_Venne1mth
    Replied to xMilfHunterx

    Yes I've written 40 chapters for a new fanfic, "Fist of Haki" it might be my greatest work so far. I haven't started releasing yet as it is Ramadan and I want to focus on my religion for now. maybe after 2 weeks I'll start releasing

    Ch 53 Extra chapter: The life of a prince
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