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Thanks for your comment, but this was intended as a comedy first and foremost. The story doesn't get very dark nor very serious, it's mostly comedy but it has its action and adventure moments as well. if you want a mainly action story, then my Naruto one is the right one for you. if you want a drama story, then my Lion King story is for you. sorry to disappoint you.
It wasn't that Moria was weak, the problem was in the fact that Oda hadn't really gotten the hang of powers along until much later. the seven warlord are supposed to be 1/3 of the superpowers of the sea along side The emperors and marines. although they are weaker than the emperors, they weren't supposed to be that far behind. But they were introduced early in the story so they seemed much weaker compared to those introduced later. I mean, look at Crocodile, Moria and even Shanks in the early story! I would even dare to say that in the early chapters, even Garp seems very weak compared to his appearance in the later chapters. Look at Ace, he seemed weak, but it was confirmed later on that he knew all types of Haki, and his conquerors haki could shake a whole island. this problem with power scaling is a curse on all long manga, look at Naruto, Kakashi, third Hokage, Orochimaru, all of them were much, much weaker before chunnin exams and after time skip everyone got way more powerful. that's the problem. Moria probably knew Haki as he was confirmed to be Kaidos rival in their younger days. it was just that Moria was introduced too early
Well, MC had only surface knowledge of marvel, he had seen movies but he wasn't that deeply involved with that world. He was a DC fan. He had seen some movies but he wasn't aware of her existence, that's one of the reasons he made that reckless move. but yeah you're right, I did write that out poorly. this was my first fanfic, the ones after this got substantially better and I did learn from my mistakes. I got less and less complaints for my fanfics after this one. so if you felt like this fanfic was even slightly good, then you should read my other works!
Okay this has to be one of the most creative and funny comments! 😅 For those that missed it, on the last paragraph where the author wrote that MC became a civil servant instead of a teacher, this dude commented the gif just below "and where did that bring you?" and then on this paragraph where the author said that MC still became a Sensei this dude commented the gif above. funny joke, 9/10 would laugh again
This is the best TVD/TO fanfic I've read so far. MC still retains some of Klaus's personality while still showing more car soft his family. Klaus was such a fascinating character because of his ruthlessness, yet there was a hint of good in him. I would've liked to see this story start just after the mikaelsons got turned. 4.4/5 stars!
Really annoying when his title changes every two sentences. so far he's been called, admiral, vice admiral, rear admiral and colonel. And not once or twice, it has been changing every other sentence since the first chapter.
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He isn't in a mountain, the correct translation would be "come out of seclusion" or "come out of hiding"
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Thank you, I am happy since it feels like I reached my goal with what I intended for this fanfic. I wanted to take back the reader to re-experience the lion king while diving deeper into the circle of life, all the while giving the reader a "new" story. I loved the lion King when I was younger and I wanted to share that love!
Seeing this comment still makes me laugh after 3 months. You have my type of humour!
What if I identify as others? And my pronouns are their/theirs. is this story still mine or is it theirs?
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Don't worry, soon there will be a timeskip and then he'll be really op. superman was kinda weak in his teenage years. he only became like the most powerful being in his prime adult years, people often forget that.
Yes I've written 40 chapters for a new fanfic, "Fist of Haki" it might be my greatest work so far. I haven't started releasing yet as it is Ramadan and I want to focus on my religion for now. maybe after 2 weeks I'll start releasing