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Aren't there already a lot of fanfics with Gojo or Infinity in them?

Multiversal novel without harem? I think it's just this grandpa universe, the only thing I ask is that at least he doesn't become a pokemon trainer

Oh, evil mc, let's see what he proposes, ah, rxpe and being an idiot. Your MC is not evil, he is just a loser whose only quality is having a system and who only thinks with his dick. You write well, but it was not what I expected to find when seeing that rating.

It's a criticism but I don't mean it in a bad way? Your story is good, I was just expecting another surprise.

The situation will be very forced, I knew you were going to do this but I still thought you wouldn't do it, chapters ago he said that he had interacted with his other personality and that it even cured him, it is absurd that this situation causes problems for Garo, well simply "First" was the only one who lived during his escape, that is, he is special, so it would be something that "could be discussed" between "Garo and Joe", Joe unknowingly the name of the "First", would obviously refer to him in that way telling the story of his escape

Dude, if after Aang almost killed him, he still helped them, that would be hypocritical.

To be honest, I give it a solid 5, I really enjoyed reading it and your quality of writing is incredible, good luck [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Spoilers ============ The MC makes a binding vow where he gives up all knowledge of his previous world and half of his soul, in exchange for an attack that damages souls, he begins to lose his sanity and feelings, yes... good luck with your fic, no is for me

The story probably won't be more than 60 chapters, but you have a writing style that I like, so... [img=bofetada][img=bofetada][img=bofetada]

World?

People don't seem to remember that the door was left open to that possibility. I've been waiting for several chapters for the son to visit him in some way or for Hector to feel it.

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There are few stories in Tensura with Mc villain, that you spend more time turning him into a pxrn is sad

yes, I think not

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doing the word count reduces your story by one star, so by reading the 3 chapters you currently have and rating, I subtract one star

I hope so, it would be interesting and I have not seen it before

I read the novel several years ago, so I don't remember much, but I think it would be more or less doable on the Void King level, so much, anyway, KOG is kind of a meme in the cultivation