Review Detail of Br4tsch in Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

They're probably in vibes with the edgy tone of this novel in other words

It's only in the first few chapters... That's why you have to read 10+ chapters first to review a story.

Sometimes you come from a long list of novel failures

Por que no te pones a escribir una novela vos ?, de tanto criticar , se nota que no tenes para escribir

Y porque uno tiene que escribir una novela para poder criticar? no tiene sentido tu oración

This is generally correct; wait for one arc before conducting a deep review. However, a simple review like this is better than a random 5-star review without any actual 'review.' If chapters 10+ are 'good,' the author should rewrite the first 9 chapters, as most people will decide whether to commit to the story or not based on the prologue. For example, I don't read this story past Chapter 1 since it's so bad.

Where does he abruptly change personality? that makes sense

please read my new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"

What kind of brain rot is required to not be able to read 5 chapsters. (Which is the extent of the ‘storytelling’ section)? Go read some Dr.Seus if that is so difficult for your feeble brain.

only the first 10 chapter ant that's because MC is narrating the story of his like until this moment