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Darwin111111

Darwin111111

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No hay mucho que quiera decir, quiero ganar algo de dinero haciendo mi pasatiempo (Entrenamiento) para luego hacer una novela.

2019-03-13 JoinedDominican Republic
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111d
    Replied to Reaper_9597

    I read the whole thing and it honestly sucked. Not because it's bad, but because it's not what I expected and therefore it was boring. I mean, I forced myself to read it.

    Ch 83 Interlude (5): FOUNDATION
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    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111117d
    Replied to Conor_Webster

    Yes... Is his hatred so high to the point of bullying her and trying to hit her? What horrible things will the protagonist of the dating game do?

    Ch 9 Practical Test (6)
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    I'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!
    Others · ItsJustANightmare
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111120d
    Commented

    That is, Kakashi, a jounin of the most OP in perception, could not notice a genin. I mean, it's not impossible, but you could have narrated that he trained with his father to the point of being able to prevent a Jounin from discovering that he is watching him while traveling along a route taking care of people.

    Ch 6 The land of waves
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    The notorious shikamaru
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111120d
    Commented

    I mean... It comes out just because. 👍🏻. Don't mess around, I want to be the explanation for her.

    Ch 5 Leaving the village
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    The notorious shikamaru
    Anime & Comics · wap100
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111124d
    Commented

    Pride in something is not a sin. Be proud yes. In general, feeling too proud of something you do.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    Let There Be Light (DxD Biblical God!SI)
    Anime & Comics · Kakukami
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111125d
    Commented

    ....

    Ch 100 Chapter 95 : "R-18" I Think
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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111130d
    Replied to Viadhivan_Ranata

    Well yes they are OP. Sorry for not responding. I'm literally on my cell phone on the online page. This has the defect of not being able to comment on specific paragraphs.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Dance of the Butterflies.
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    Yu-Gi-Oh! ZD: Rise of the Dragons (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Lee5463
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin11111130d
    Commented

    So much training and preparation... I thought there would be more.

    Ch 27 vs Berserker
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    Reincarnated in Fate/kaleid as Shirou Emiya
    Anime & Comics · kurit_kun
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    Wao... El apocalipsis no ha comenzado y el ya tuvo el nivel mental de matar personas... Aun sin pasar dichas dificultades y privaciones de... Bueno, derechos y ventajas de vivir en una sociedad.

    Ch 14 13.High School of the DEAD
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    Level Up in Highschool of the Dead
    Anime & Comics · KanmuruZ
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    Intenta con toda tu alma no resumir lo que hace el personaje como acabas de hacer. Simplemente cuenta la historia, no su resumen, sin importar lo tedioso que sea, porque si no sera un resumen de hice esto y lo otro, y cuando quieras usar X cosa, no tendrá coherencia.

    Ch 11 Yay, A Fight?
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    Percy Jackson: Wouldn’t You know it
    Book&Literature · ReaderOfTheSwords
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    Not a day went well and he was already unfaithful to his wife 🤦

    Ch 69 [69] I'm Waiting for You to Conquer Me! Little Man!
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    Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?
    Anime & Comics · XElenea
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    This is so Chinese novel XD. Ruining your life by not telling a woman about something that wouldn't hurt her any worse than a scolding or destroying your position by not explaining something simple like, I ran into her, we talked, I realized who she was, I followed her to I arrived home without problems and this is when you arrived. The protagonist remained silent and spoke after hitting everyone, making it look as if they were wrong because of something stupid.

    Ch 22 Suppression  
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    Now he also adds to his power that when he does a Zanpakuto he gains more reiatsu. Lol. Everything is false, he literally creates the materials with his energy. How is he going to increase your energy? I mean, there are specific weapons that do, but if you don't take it out, how can you increase anything? The Emiya spirit would be incredibly powerful if it were like that. This protagonist is destined to be OP without doing much. He just has to walk through the soul society in different divisions and meetings and already, he is the most OP, because even he gets weapons from the future. I mean, bro, the only limitation that the author put on him is that he can't leave because he is in the second division. If he agrees to join the medical division, it's a problem solved.

    Ch 18 The New Weapon – One-Hit Killer: Murasame  
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    Another convenience, you get weapons from the future for... Why not? It is advisable that you discover it now and not before.

    Ch 17 New Zanpakutō  
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    One of the problems is that this guy gets ALL of the experience from the person holding the sword instead of the sword moves.

    Ch 17 New Zanpakutō  
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Replied to AutorZama

    Make a reaction story. Where they after the guardian returns from the future see everything he did and what he will do. Sounds interesting if you ask me.

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    Guardian Tales: Biblioteca de Mundos
    Fantasy · AutorZama
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Replied to Corey_Hall_0942

    I'm still waiting for this story.

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    Dragon Ball: The Legendary Manga Maker!
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Commented

    O sea qué? Los recuerdos de 'cierto medio demonio' salen de las nalgas. ¿Como funciona eso? Yo veo un cuchillo de mi tía en televisión, reencarno en otro mundo y ya por eso puedo proyectar el cuchillo y los recuerdos de mi tia sosteniendolo en televisión? De hecho no sé porque el protagonista perdió el tiempo en algo que obviamente fallaría porque... Si no tenia el análisis y, para el colmo, no la había visto frente a frente en ese momento ¿Como demonios espera ganar los recuerdos de la espada? Eso es lo que estaba buscando, pero no tenía sentido que explorará tanto. Ya mucho hizo al recrearlas, pero lo de los recuerdos me parece una escusa tremenda.

    Ch 7 The First Successfully Forged Sword - Tessaiga  
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Replied to OPELER

    Yes, that's it.... Then she simply doesn't qualify as human. Unless it's just a clan name and that's it.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Members
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    DxD: A Multiverse Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • Darwin111111
    Darwin1111111mth
    Posted

    I mean, I like everything, but the fact that I practically get everything that others have with effort, just getting it like that is boring. If only they gave more depth or difficulty to the use of the powers... Nuances to show that it at least requires experience or something like that.

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    Mangaka in the StrawHats
    Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation
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