Darwin111111
No hay mucho que quiera decir, quiero ganar algo de dinero haciendo mi pasatiempo (Entrenamiento) para luego hacer una novela.
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Yes... Is his hatred so high to the point of bullying her and trying to hit her? What horrible things will the protagonist of the dating game do?
That is, Kakashi, a jounin of the most OP in perception, could not notice a genin. I mean, it's not impossible, but you could have narrated that he trained with his father to the point of being able to prevent a Jounin from discovering that he is watching him while traveling along a route taking care of people.
Intenta con toda tu alma no resumir lo que hace el personaje como acabas de hacer. Simplemente cuenta la historia, no su resumen, sin importar lo tedioso que sea, porque si no sera un resumen de hice esto y lo otro, y cuando quieras usar X cosa, no tendrá coherencia.
This is so Chinese novel XD. Ruining your life by not telling a woman about something that wouldn't hurt her any worse than a scolding or destroying your position by not explaining something simple like, I ran into her, we talked, I realized who she was, I followed her to I arrived home without problems and this is when you arrived. The protagonist remained silent and spoke after hitting everyone, making it look as if they were wrong because of something stupid.
Now he also adds to his power that when he does a Zanpakuto he gains more reiatsu. Lol. Everything is false, he literally creates the materials with his energy. How is he going to increase your energy? I mean, there are specific weapons that do, but if you don't take it out, how can you increase anything? The Emiya spirit would be incredibly powerful if it were like that. This protagonist is destined to be OP without doing much. He just has to walk through the soul society in different divisions and meetings and already, he is the most OP, because even he gets weapons from the future. I mean, bro, the only limitation that the author put on him is that he can't leave because he is in the second division. If he agrees to join the medical division, it's a problem solved.
O sea qué? Los recuerdos de 'cierto medio demonio' salen de las nalgas. ¿Como funciona eso? Yo veo un cuchillo de mi tía en televisión, reencarno en otro mundo y ya por eso puedo proyectar el cuchillo y los recuerdos de mi tia sosteniendolo en televisión? De hecho no sé porque el protagonista perdió el tiempo en algo que obviamente fallaría porque... Si no tenia el análisis y, para el colmo, no la había visto frente a frente en ese momento ¿Como demonios espera ganar los recuerdos de la espada? Eso es lo que estaba buscando, pero no tenía sentido que explorará tanto. Ya mucho hizo al recrearlas, pero lo de los recuerdos me parece una escusa tremenda.