Ah... Well, sorry, that's how it translates into Spanish when I read. Sometimes I forget it's there.

It feels disappointing, but oh well. Let's imagine that it could have been a day without chapters to get through it.

Exaggerated reactions. They got too into the characters.

Siguela... O has una novela ToP son las mejores novelas en las que no hay que trabajar mas que mostrar las reacciones de X personajes. Los chinos lo hacen bien, pero la cagan a X altura.

Oh... Not the character self-inserts. Now it turns out that Celestine was Shiro's adoptive mother... It's not my preference so I'm leaving, but if others like it that's fine. It's just my preference

I didn't know that adolescence continued until twenty. I mean, he thought it was until 16, but 18 so they don't get carried away by hormones and get addicted to something.

You screwed up with the dementors. It was better to show exploits from the canon, or invent them, but keep them in the universe. You skipped to Harry Potter.

Lastima que no explica caso nada... O incluso muestra.

Hear it. XD. How greedy. You can easily earn 1 for defeating common criminals, and you get 5 for defeating a ninja. If you defeat a... Let's say criminal mastermind, do you want 20? Even 50 is not worth the effort.

Oh... Ha llegado a este punto. Este es el momento donde todos ustedes deberan saltarse capitulos... Muchos capitulos. Probablemente 20 o 30. Literalmente es jodidamente aburrido de leer. (Principalmente porque no he visto lo que ven ellos)

Es más como poder regalado. El protagonista gana poder sin hacer gran cosa.

At last!

Probably dead. It's been two years since his last comment. Shooting for 3.

Probably dead... F. You made a good fanfic 3 years ago. Out of respect, I will keep your fate or Type moon fanfic in my library. Whatever you want to call it.

Yes, a real shame... Let me see if he's dead. If he's dead, he shouldn't be reading fanfics or novels on the page.

Well, it was absurd enough. It is not born within me to see another son of one of the pillars tell his story OP... Again. She humbly bid me farewell and I wish you luck. I hope you find people who like these clichés. I mean, the colors were made for taste. Just because I don't like seeing it, doesn't mean that someone else doesn't.

Mira los nombres chinos XD.

Friend I don't understand. Maybe because I haven't seen fate yet, but Pluto is Hades or is it Erihs.... Her... It's just difficult to write her name. Anyway, I know it should be her. Because you don't correct so many names that refer to a single person if you are a translator. It is outrageous.

Este fanfic tiene buenas ideas, pero avanza rapidísimo y obtiene beneficios con casi ningun esfuerzo. Creo que el tipo no ha sangrado ni siquiera en la mazmorra. Literalmente solo ha 'trabajado mucho' en el punto de que ha tenido que correr mucho y matar muchos monstruos, no es como que haya planeado mucho o tenga una destreza marcial que ha entrenado. No, puro poder regalado. Esto es prácticamente el balanceando una espada supongo (me da la sensación) no hay extrategias o sacrificios. No es como si estuviera siendo cuidadoso, porque no lo era. Y para el colmo, desde el principio tiene armas OP. Esto es, básicamente, otro fanfic del monton que cuenta lo mismo, pero en otro anime. (No quiero ofenderte, pero es así).

I don't mind how it goes. I'm not a Demon slayer fan, but so far, I can handle it. And the fear thing... It was enough I guess. Not bad, but don't make this a long drama. The guy already accepted that he is afraid of the dark or 'what is hidden in the dark', there is no need to make a drama. Search for the origin of fear? Yes, but I don't think you need to go to a psychologist to explain in many words that you are afraid of the dark. In general, you should ask the psychologist how to overcome it or cope with it if it is SUCH an extensive fear. He now asked you to ask yourself the question: What is the intensity of his fear? Is it as exaggerated as Finn the human's fear of the sea in Adventure Time? Because that one is exaggerated. Or he just gets a little paranoid and panics slightly in the dark (like claustrophobics). Simply, the fear that you put in him is as if he were afraid of... Of... I suppose of a brother who wanted to kill him and luckily didn't succeed, but who had tortured you or hurt you. Or something like that. I am not a psychologist, but I am simulating fears with my experience (I have been afraid of the dark as a child and... As an adult, sometimes, when you are alone, you can fear, but you convince yourself that it makes no sense and you continue, other times You just get a little paranoid about overthinking things.