Review Detail of Kw0z in What!? Never seen a Demon King of Lust before?
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So many unnecessary words. The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said. I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion. One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
What!? Never seen a Demon King of Lust before?
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Aria_Monrow:Ok! I agree with you but it isn't garbage. Sometimes it is necessary to add details to make the readers feel like they are inside the world they are reading. The author will get better with time.
Kw0z:It really is sad how garbage like this is on the front page, while actual good novels never appear since Webnovel only ever features contracted novels.
Are you dumb? Half of the people on here who write novels are minors, and you can’t even join the contract without an ID even if you’re invited.
Night_Crawler619:If they are actual good novels they'd be contracted?
No, I'm not dumb but clearly you are. Contract can be signed by a guardian's ID. Well, anyway, do tell me one of those 'actual good written' novels tho.
Kw0z:Are you dumb? Half of the people on here who write novels are minors, and you can’t even join the contract without an ID even if you’re invited.
Hey don't take it in a bad way, it's a good novel you just need to keep on improving that's how we all grow in our respective fields so good job 👍 👍
Kira_Kazuto_4040:Thanks you for your opinion ☺ have a nice day
lol, no offense but I don't think WN works like that. I mean, I knew extremely bad novels with bad grammar ceontracted. No offense
Night_Crawler619:If they are actual good novels they'd be contracted?
No clue. Kind of rare to see authors on here take the reviews to heart instead of saying something along the lines of “English isn’t my first language” or just insulting the reviewer. I mean, just because English isn’t your first language doesn’t mean your trashy grammar should just be ignored.
Chaosscythe:Did the author somehow like this comment by mistake?! Hhhhhhhimage
No, no, I know firsthand what you're saying is true. (look at mine xD). I never said they ONLY offer contracts to good books. The thing is, they offer contract based on the marketing potential of the novel. If the novel has a good plot that they think can sell among the readers, they would offer you the contract. And if a 'good novel' is not contracted, then that only means either it's not good or it's just dosen't comply with normal wn standards. In most of the cases, it's the former. I've hardly ever come across a book that's good and not contracted.
Mylittledragon:lol, no offense but I don't think WN works like that. I mean, I knew extremely bad novels with bad grammar ceontracted. No offense
Night_Crawler619:No, no, I know firsthand what you're saying is true. (look at mine xD). I never said they ONLY offer contracts to good books. The thing is, they offer contract based on the marketing potential of the novel. If the novel has a good plot that they think can sell among the readers, they would offer you the contract. And if a 'good novel' is not contracted, then that only means either it's not good or it's just dosen't comply with normal wn standards. In most of the cases, it's the former. I've hardly ever come across a book that's good and not contracted.
E_J_6947:No he is the best the world backround is great and so are the other chara cters
some good novels I've read and taughted for years are, supreme magus, chrysalis, and hold on I'll be back gotta sift through my library for more recent ones!
Night_Crawler619:No, I'm not dumb but clearly you are. Contract can be signed by a guardian's ID. Well, anyway, do tell me one of those 'actual good written' novels tho.