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Kira_Kazuto_40406mthPostedOkay, I will be honest here, This author has a lot of experience in writing good Yandere stories from what I have seen so far. You see Yandere and the sci-fi genre are my cup of tea so I look for them wherever they pop up. Even the least popular ones are in my collection. So when I saw the author decided to write another Yandere story I got excited, and can't wait to see where the direction of this story will go.And Honestly speaking I don't write reviews unless I find the concept somewhat interesting. But let me just lay out the pros and the cons. I will start with the cons. . Light Grammar mistakes! . Two-faced Mc with the excuse of his personality change being put on his race change. . Update once a day (understandable). I believe that the author is a sadist given how dark this Mc mental train of thought is, then and again Xander from MSITMIAY (His Other Work) is far worse but he is excused because he is Yandere. . Lack of explanation of why the apocalypse even started. . Some scenes will leave you confused till the very end of the branch. . The world is not fledge out completely leaving me a little lost. Now unto the pros. Pros. . Compared to some novels on this site with trash quality, the English in this piece is superb, not perfect but better than most. . Yandere who doesn't like them? . The chapter is long and very descriptive. . Unique system, to be honest, I can't call what he has a system but it's a welcome change in my opinion. . Overpowered Mc and Villian downright, proven that Mc isn't the strongest and if he messes up in the slightest it is Game over for him. . Devious and Semi-Evil Mc (Acquired taste). DND player's wet dream, guilty as charge lol, but the author seems to avoid Cliche like some of the races are nostalgic for me. . No level-up bullshit and confusing EXP gain, thank God I use to love these but I know it ruins the story if not done by someone with actual exp in the field of LITRPG. . Mc has to use imagination and creativity to master his powers. . Harem Romance (Guilty pleasure). No Yuri base one author reply in the reviews (Acquired taste) although I would have liked it. But each to their own. All in all, it's an amazing story although it has a few noticeable plot holes in my opinion which the author can still fix. Conclusion. From what I have seen and read from this author over the months till now, can say he is the type that makes fast-paced, action pack stories with good premises and good romances, and again I would say give him twenty to thirty more chapters and the world and the story will truly come together. SO LET THE AUTHOR COOK!!!
- Kira_Kazuto_404011mthCommentedCh 144 Asmodeus Morningstar × Asmodeus Morningstar
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Kthilla
Kthilla: is The Witch of Secrets, a Demi-God born in the epoch of the Astral God, which would be sixty million years in the past when putting into the perspective of the current Era, her mother was a mortal woman, and priestess of the Holy Kingdom of Zarion, her father is the Astral God Yohßhot, sometime in the past her father sealed her in fear of her power that allows her to hide from the influence of the Gods, till eventually due some twist of fate she met Sherlock and in attempts to get revenge she made a pact with Sherlock that would cost her; her life if she went through with it. - Kira_Kazuto_404011mthCommented
Denzel Prelati
Denzel Prelati: Is a hot-tampered man, with a fast mouth, he is also the oldest of the three brothers but in terms of destructive power he exceeds them all, he is the absolute unit of the family, and his ability is fire magic, by eating coal he can increase the temperature of his flames and utilize it a variety of different ways, similar to a furnace. - Kira_Kazuto_404011mthCommented
Alexander Prelati
Alexander Prelati: Is the second brother, he is described as the playboy of the family, however out of all of them Alexander has zero fear or self-worth for the mere fact he is immortal, he has been shot, decapitated, burned alive, crushed, mutilated, eaten, and much more, but despite all of this he resurrects without issue, his hobby is collecting monocles and cane, however when it's comes to the family he will go beyond and more to keep them safe. - Kira_Kazuto_404011mthCommented
Sherlock Prelati
Sherlock Prelati: is a man whose soul has been transmigrated over to the body of a young boy who also shared his name, he was an undertaker in his previous life, and in this world there exist many supernatural things little known by the public, a variety hidden in the society of occultism, but the little things known is that fact that there exist superior humans known as witches and warlock who has miraculous abilities call magic, Sherlock can see the ghost of the dead and interact with them, he is expressionless from the outside meaning he never shows emotions, but in reality, he is the most emotional of them all. - Kira_Kazuto_40401yrReplied to qwystal
It might be a typo but the higher the tier the stronger someone is, Asmodeus is Tier-Base Gaia and Even is Tier 5 nearing 6, there is a total of 10
❖ Power Level: Tier-1 existence - Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedMórrigan: Is Morgan's female counterpart, although they are the same person, he later split her personality into two via his unique abilities, the two are extremely close so much so, they choose not to split themselves into separate bodies majority of the time as they feel comfortable together as one, although Mórrigan prefer to get close and personal with her enemies, unlike Morgan who attacks from far range.
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedMórrigan: Is Morgan's female counterpart, although they are the same person, he later split her personality into two via his unique abilities, the two are extremely close so much so, they choose not to split themselves into separate bodies majority of the time as they feel comfortable together as one, although Mórrigan prefer to get close and personal with her enemies, unlike Morgan who attacks from far range.
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedMorgan: Is the main character of the series, he was described as a timid-looking albino, with whitish silver hair, silver eyes, and a lean build, sometimes he was mistaken as a woman for his androgynous appearance, but later down the series stuff happened, and his appearance change, he is more muscular, and tall, his hair became longer, and his eyes change from silver to red from time-to-time depending on his emotions, he wears long black trench coat made from his shadows and blood, with a gothic outfit, and drippy black Fedora, he always carries two dual pistols that can take the form of a vintage rifle.
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedDesedoma Apostle Form
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Desedoma Apostle form, although he has countless tentacles beneath the cloak
"My lord, how do I look? Does this form please you? Will it be useful to you?" - Kira_Kazuto_40401yrReplied to FantasyTrollCh 72 Official Art for Characters
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedEve: The Mother of Humanity
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedGaia: Father Earth
- Kira_Kazuto_40401yrCommentedIs one of the Immortal progenitor vampires, she suffers from malnutrition due to restraining her glutton tendencies for the sake of not eating out her people, she is mostly in a loli state due to her condition, but in her true form she is a beautiful seductive woman, with long curly purple hair, blood red eyes, and extremely visually pale skin, she is dressed in a gothic Victorian red and purple dress, it is said any that look at her for the first time would be bewitched by her, she called the unparallel beauty of the Vampire world.