Review Detail of Sabah_1853 in The Martial Unity
Review detail
the mc is just an enthusiast with a certain determination like there are plenty of them, nothing incredible, he is mediocre and the geniuses who surround him constantly remind us of this, no system too just a talentless one who persists basic personality too so think ppl Can relate? so advice to readers who project themselves on the mc it can frustrate you to see him so mediocre or pathetic and be eclipsed by kids who are real geniuses I find the process useless the mc is just a determined enthusiast as there are full he adds nothing to the story we just have the impression of following a story from the pov of a lambda person it could have been him like another I imagine that it is for us shown an mc who succeeds without to be exceptional but he has a plot and a unique chance so he is not even that ordinary in the end so the process is useless and good god it's boring to see him surrounded by young people who are the complete opposite of him it's really frustrating it just serves to remind us his mediocrity but apparently he Want to become the strongest(BS) lol good Luck shonen power
The Martial Unity
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Isn’t just about every story on this app about the human desire to get better? The difference is if they do it through hard work or it’s gifted to them.
TheNobleLion:If I wanted to read about the human desire and effort to get better, I'd read biographies.
Apparently the human desire and effort to get better is less interesting to some readers than a god-like system that puts screens in your head to view other’s strengths. 😂 I’m enjoying this story. It’s fun, original, and the characters and scenarios are both fantastical and scientific at the same time.
I_cant_choose_name:What happens after 20 chapters I don't want to read till there if I will just drop it.
Haven't read the story, but in general something unrealistic is way more interesting than something achievable to most people. Why read about 'normal' master swordsman when you can read about swordsman that splits mountains with his eyes closed.
Mark_D_Pierson:Apparently the human desire and effort to get better is less interesting to some readers than a god-like system that puts screens in your head to view other’s strengths. 😂 I’m enjoying this story. It’s fun, original, and the characters and scenarios are both fantastical and scientific at the same time.
FallenAngeI:Haven't read the story, but in general something unrealistic is way more interesting than something achievable to most people. Why read about 'normal' master swordsman when you can read about swordsman that splits mountains with his eyes closed.
Mark_D_Pierson:Apparently the human desire and effort to get better is less interesting to some readers than a god-like system that puts screens in your head to view other’s strengths. 😂 I’m enjoying this story. It’s fun, original, and the characters and scenarios are both fantastical and scientific at the same time.
Fair point. I was more referring to the "struggle of an ordinary person". I don’t believe pure hard works if you're born with a really bad hand and that bad hand continues in life. Rather than read about an average guy getting lucky enough to get super strong after a long time, I'd rather read about someone who was talented or gifted somehow from the get-go so that I don't have to suffer through reading about the MC being constantly worse than others only to get a payoff at the end. Although, I suppose that's more of a personal preference.
Mark_D_Pierson:Isn’t just about every story on this app about the human desire to get better? The difference is if they do it through hard work or it’s gifted to them.
I can understand that. The MC in this story is hardly ordinary, but I’m not going to push the story down anyone’s throat. I’m really enjoying it. It just started a new arc, but I don’t want to give away anything by commenting on it for new readers that are further back in the story than me.
TheNobleLion:Fair point. I was more referring to the "struggle of an ordinary person". I don’t believe pure hard works if you're born with a really bad hand and that bad hand continues in life. Rather than read about an average guy getting lucky enough to get super strong after a long time, I'd rather read about someone who was talented or gifted somehow from the get-go so that I don't have to suffer through reading about the MC being constantly worse than others only to get a payoff at the end. Although, I suppose that's more of a personal preference.
FallenAngeI:Haven't read the story, but in general something unrealistic is way more interesting than something achievable to most people. Why read about 'normal' master swordsman when you can read about swordsman that splits mountains with his eyes closed.