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Wasn't meant to be hostile. Just pointing out that what this fella said made no sense. If "you haven’t seen much", why write a review? And if you have seen something, why not actually write that down instead? Sometimes it's better to let someone know that what they did is stupid. Helps them to avoid that very thing later.
As others have mentioned, the story is pretty fun up until chapter 355. After which, for some reason, the author decided to copy an (in my opinion) inferior novel word for word. Which, of course, not only takes the author's reputation down the drain, but also kills the quality of the novel. What can I say, the author must be a dumba*s.
A fairly subpar novel. The main character comes off as a bit of a whimp who gets depressed at the slightest of things. Dude just awakened telekinesis and he feels inferior to a man with a little more paper. On a personal level, just don't find it fun that the MC lacks spine, no matter how "real" it may be. It may get better in the future, but the start of this novel isn't gripping enough for me.
I have a minor issue with this one, and that's the inconsistency of the pacing. At times, we have our MC crazily breaking through or speeding through events. Then at other times, we have long drawn out sequences of chump characters that no one cares about. That all being said, I'm REALLY enjoying this. It's a fun and interesting concept that's executed pretty well so far. The pacing issue can be mitigated by just having more chapters so it's not a huge deal. Hoping this gets picked!
There aren’t super glaring issues. It's just a fairly bland and unexciting novel. The author doesn't know how to do a lot of things, such as: - Putting in a sense of thrill and mystery with the world building - Having interesting character interactions - Writing exciting battles It's like eating food with no salt or seasoning. Some people are fine with it, personally don't find the it fun.