Review Detail of Warmaisach in Sword God in a World of Magic
Review detail
Five stars because I like my story. Welcome to my second novel! I already wrote and (nearly, depending on when you read this) finished my first novel Lightning Is the only Way at over 1300 chapters. There have been some mistakes in my first novel since it was, well, my first novel. This one is my second novel, and I rectified those mistakes. When I write, I mainly focus on emotions. It doesn't matter which one, power, loss, depression, happiness, whatever. I believe novels have to evoke emotions in the reader, and that's what I focus on. You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback. Have fun reading!
Sword God in a World of Magic
Warmaisach
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thank god authour didnt listen to you or anyone else that asked for harems. Please stop commenting for harems ya'll genuinely annoying and most authors that listen to people like you just end up making story mid at best.
AMAN_KUMAR_LAL:please add romantic and harem to this venture because I think you can pull off realistic romantic emotions. So please!!!!
I’ve noticed in LitOW that you use the word ‘yet’ a lot and the word ‘however’ to a lesser degree. This is not criticism, but if I’m the future you are looking for words that express the same meaning while not seeming repetitive, a thasuras will help in that regard, assuming of course you don’t know about said thasuras. Best regards. P.s. I’m the same guy who suggested you release 5 chapters every 100th chapter, and you know how that went over.
Kuykendall:I’ve noticed in LitOW that you use the word ‘yet’ a lot and the word ‘however’ to a lesser degree. This is not criticism, but if I’m the future you are looking for words that express the same meaning while not seeming repetitive, a thasuras will help in that regard, assuming of course you don’t know about said thasuras. Best regards. P.s. I’m the same guy who suggested you release 5 chapters every 100th chapter, and you know how that went over.
AMAN_KUMAR_LAL:please add romantic and harem to this venture because I think you can pull off realistic romantic emotions. So please!!!!
I loved Litow. I like how you focus on emotions, thereby making the characters relatable. Moreover, you clearly demonstrate how cruel the cultivation world is. You know, in the majority of the novels I have read, the MC always has it easy or has been gifted some item that makes his cultivation journey easy. But in Litow, you have outlined how hard the MC's life is and how he had to truly work to achieve his goals. I only came across Litow towards the end of February and have been supporting it as much as it is within my means. Your second novel also has an amazing start and I will do my best to support you. These may sound like empty words to you as I am unable to actually support you by buying golden tickets or privilege chapters. I hope I was able to convey how special Litow was to me and I'm sure the new novel will be the same.
diablo247:I loved Litow. I like how you focus on emotions, thereby making the characters relatable. Moreover, you clearly demonstrate how cruel the cultivation world is. You know, in the majority of the novels I have read, the MC always has it easy or has been gifted some item that makes his cultivation journey easy. But in Litow, you have outlined how hard the MC's life is and how he had to truly work to achieve his goals. I only came across Litow towards the end of February and have been supporting it as much as it is within my means. Your second novel also has an amazing start and I will do my best to support you. These may sound like empty words to you as I am unable to actually support you by buying golden tickets or privilege chapters. I hope I was able to convey how special Litow was to me and I'm sure the new novel will be the same.
first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.
Warmaisach:Not answering any of those two questions.
Reviews based on purely wanting the story to adopt a trope YOU want personally are useless anyways :)
tortle:first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.
tortle:first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.
that's the point...why would someone read what they doesn't want and that's why they ask or look into tags but here is someone who doesn't wanna answer...that leads to readers wasting their time and lastly giving bad reviews. And it's ok because I am over this, why would I even read this when I am getting this type of response just because of a simple question.
KornKob:Not how reviews work, at that point you're just being a child who didn't get what he wanted
I think the novel would attract more readers if you made the name of the novel shorter. the current name sounds like name of many of those trash novels. like those "sign in" or those "i trained for 10000 years and became invincible" I mean the name is fitting and clearly tells what the novel is about but it's still bit too long. Maybe something not so direct..
Not a big fan of the name too, but it's sadly necessary on Webnovel. I have gotten quite a lot of feedback that a lot of people didn't even consider reading Lightning Is the Only Way because of the name.
GifflarGod:I think the novel would attract more readers if you made the name of the novel shorter. the current name sounds like name of many of those trash novels. like those "sign in" or those "i trained for 10000 years and became invincible" I mean the name is fitting and clearly tells what the novel is about but it's still bit too long. Maybe something not so direct..
how is it necessary? there are plenty of novels with short names that are up there. and those novels are webnovel originals. I think you've gotten so much audience from your first novel that many would read this novel just because we know that you wrote lighting is the only way and we know you are good writer
Warmaisach:Not a big fan of the name too, but it's sadly necessary on Webnovel. I have gotten quite a lot of feedback that a lot of people didn't even consider reading Lightning Is the Only Way because of the name.
