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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    ok definitely harem route...and i like it.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: I'm not a villain after all
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    Eternal Villain: I can enslave Reality!
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    There is no need to display skills every time you show the system status, author. Most of the information was already covered by the two status windows you showed.

    Ch 12 Finally hope
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    Based on your writing, I am guessing you are a high school student aspiring to be an author?

    Ch 7 Banished
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Replied to WitheredRose333

    I don't have much hope for character development after reading the first two chapters, which had numerous plot holes. Even talented writers struggle to achieve substantial character growth, so this author is unlikely to succeed. It might be better to have the character undergo a personality change after death.

    Ch 5 Life after Death
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    There are so many plot holes, it seems completely contrived.

    Ch 4 Faults that are not...
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    bro why not start using grammarly and ai for better writing.

    Ch 15 Dare to Play a Little Trick, and Even Dare to Go Overboard!
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Replied to LordSirius

    you are forgetting that there are less then 1000 people on 2 star in the city and mc is already comparable to those 2 star knights. So don't consider his age for the money he has earned. That is also the reason why he is wearing a cape.

    He had saved over 150000 Star coins that he could splurge on. Money was earned to be spent after all. He was going to get her a proper technique that she could use at the Thousand Treasure Tower so that she would be able to defend herself in the forest.
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Replied to Amin_Z

    i guess you have read alot of chinese novels my guy...only those ones are like that mostly.

    He reached the appraisal room. There was a desk right beside it where a young beautiful woman was sitting. She saw Leo walk to the appraisal room.
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    can't he just hide his identity and cover up his face...and use magic however he likes.

    Ch 22 Power
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Replied to M4J0R_T0M

    because he needs 10 and he doesn't have enough money. He bought a dagger instead because it will help with the returns.

    Ch 20 Magical Beast
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Replied to Mrblack98

    he is already using magic to strengthen his body

    Ch 18 Aura Training Method
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • tortle
    tortle9mth
    Commented

    although this a like a third rate su yang, I am liking it so far...but please don't forget about the title because he doesn't behave anything like a psychopath which i was here for.

    Ch 5 Negotiations(1)
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    The Psychopath's Harem
    Fantasy · SKuLL
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to RighteousFilth

    sx scenes.

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    Requiem Of A Failed Hero
    Urban · RighteousFilth
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to Breakingmaster1

    cant agree more... definitely a simp.

    Ch 3 A fated encounter
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to Alvans

    you can read this directly...there is no connection between the stories as much as i am aware.

    Ch 1 Death
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Commented

    The story is a little slow but i am liking it so far author...also loving the writing style. I hope you won't disappoint 🤞

    Ch 11 CH 11: LIBRARY
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    God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to TheBlueCombat

    i was so confused...thnx

    "Privetik! Adam. I hope your morning went well."
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    God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to God_of_Power

    TDG?

    Ch 3 Spirit Master's Holy Triad
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    Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to _Waterproof_

    i am not a solo leveling freak, on the other side i actually hate it... and my point was not that if you actually read what i said.

    Ch 4 Stranded [1]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • tortle
    tortle10mth
    Replied to SoJoe

    read carefully...he still cant excess inventory because not enough points

    Ch 54 Level 10
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    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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