GifflarGod
A Veteran Novel Reader, Perfectionist and The Bane of all Authors. I will call out every single grammar mistake, so beware.
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I see you write many novels at the same time.. You should really just focus on one novel at a time.. gives you time to polish that one novel much more
The problem is the grammar.. it feels like things go too quickly.. it feels like someone is shouting to my ear the novel
Myriad*
so he is from another cultivation world?
maybe tell his name here
fattest*
Wudi and where*
use question marks
maybe don't need to say the name of the continent again..
THANK YOUUUUU
romance?
any*
He failed?
bring him to him*
what level is he?
pretty low level world if void level is the strongest
what is wrong with hao yu knowing?
oh so a weakling
I just can't imagine how that can be done when nuclear weapons can't do damage to a high level cultivators