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Jheydi327

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2021-11-24 JoinedCuba
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    Jheydi3271d
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    Her heart fluttered at the thought of him loving her romantically and she couldn't help but smile 'Oh, the butterflies in my stomach are flapping their wings...'
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi3271d
    Replied to Akkuzz_69

    Can you minimize this author ?. Was it necessary to use this exclamation marks every time they Explain something?.. Can they be more calm and collected?....

    "Oh? So, those who have special physiques can see other's special physiques?!" Zhao Tian asked in amusement and Xia Shenyi replied shaking her head "No, No... I found yours because I have a physique that could detect if others have rare physiques."
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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    Kazuma is proud:

    Hearing her teasing, Zhao Tian spoke "You want me to punch you again?"
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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    "And that's when I got this pendant... I got really curious, because this pendant may belong to the old war which shook the whole realm. And while researching, I suddenly got sucked into it and since then I was living here."
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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  • Jheydi327
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    Hmmmm. .I'm not used to read with this kind of writing thought.. Using dialogues between paragraphs weirded me out..

    Ch 2 A small match!
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
    Eastern · Akkuzz_69
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi3272d
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    Well I hope it's not overuse cause I'm not used to read mtl novels... It always makes me think every time why would there an Exclamation mark every time they talk or in every grammar? Are they retard?. good chapter BTW

    The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. 
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    As Zhao Ying was wearing half pants, Zhao Tian grabbed her bare thighs "Yeah, yeah... i know." His finger gently pressed into the softness of her thighs, while the motion caused her breasts to lightly brush against his back.
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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    *tap* At this time, another woman entered the room "Ying'er, how many times have I told you not to disturb Tian'er?" she asked in a soft tone looking at Zhao Ying riding on top of Zhao Tian while he was exercising.
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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  • Jheydi327
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    "!" author do you think she's talking softly if you use this mark?.. Hmmm

    The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. 
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    I alone am the Honoured One!
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi3273d
    Replied to Melon_daomaster_9

    Soo. .. Based on the synopsis, is this a plot wheres MC thinks whit his d*ck first, second and third before UISNG his brain??.. Was MC stealing others wives (even though they're already happy but still wants to steal them just like a trophy of just to satisfy his d*ck? ).. Was this another Pokémon harem?.. Wish fulfilments?. .If it is , well not my cup of tea. So tired and boring to read with this kind of not executed well stories(specially harem novels if it's not written well) nowadays...

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    Heaven defying villain:despair broke chosen ones
    Fantasy · Melon_daomaster_9
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  • Jheydi327
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    See.. This kind of MC mindset sucks.. Sti haven't move on..

    'Fuck,' looking at Tsubasa's face, I felt a pang of guilt in my heart. Had I truly not moved on? Am I really considering killing this poor girl because of someone that I've not seen for millions of years?
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    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
    Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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  • Jheydi327
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    Replied to FinnsRevenge

    Pfft.. FR.. like Those fic are not even worth a penny.. Same plot. . Same edgy MC's

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    DxD: Multiversal Therapist
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • Jheydi327
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    Replied to Dreyerboys

    Again a click bait huh.. Thanks for the warning..

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    DxD: Multiversal Therapist
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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    No morning BJ?

    "Good morning, my baby," she yawned and stretched, as she held her arms up at me as if calling a little child to embrace. I fell into her arms, embracing her tightly as I placed a kiss on her nape.
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    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
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  • Jheydi327
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    Dang author you did it again with this fic. Can you translate better.. I Mean. . Why would you mention his name or complete name every sing time there's a paragraph or narrating????.. Like bruh aren't you not irritated?.. It's getting to the point we're its hord for a reader to continue to read this.. Specially how this becoming more chaotic that the Other fic.. I think the other Hentai fic is much better than this... Like bruh... I've read soo many fic but this is a bit worse.. Can't continue reading this.. Too much Grammar mistakes from the first chapter.. I think the only better translated one is the Synopsis.. But this chapters?.. Bruh author haven't you use a grammarly or qullbot to make the grammar better??..... It's free BTW...

    Ch 4 Tachibana Kyouka and Azuma Hisato
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    The Passionate Daily Life Starting from the Tachibana Family
    Anime & Comics · Abhii_28
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi3279d
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    Hey author... Sigh* is It dropped? ..

    Ch 94 Chapter 93: Meanwhile the student council...
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    Even if I am an Ugly Bastard I want to be a good person (English)
    Anime & Comics · Bukaro
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    Jheydi3279d
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    Hmmm... Gotta stockpile first before reading this... Im not expecting much for this fic considering how good is the original story already is.. Well the more reason is that other MLN fics seems sucks and not written well.. Will this be just limited to MLN or more Manhua18 ? ... Gotta know first cause it'll be like I'm reading the same MLN fic but modified a bit.. It'll be greate if something better happens or a better plot.. Well. ..

    Ch 1 From the Ashes
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    Beyond the End (My Landlady Noona)
    Anime & Comics · Nneeil
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi32710d
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    Again with this info dumps... I guess it'll be like this for the next chapters and so on... And the update seems making it worse. No wonder so many dropped this...

    Azrail could remember it, that scene breaking his heart. This had happened later in his life, and the moment he saw it he directly tried to kill Kia, but it ended up in failure, the one she made a contract to safeguard at the last moment. From there began the rise of the iron bloody witch of chaos, a being that went on to create a great amount of chaos and death, and the funny thing being she became among the 21 catastrophes that ended realms, a great danger similar to Ravenna that affected the whole cosmos.
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    Heavenly Opposers
    Action · Chaosking
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi32710d
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    Skip*.. . Too much info dumps.. Was Author justazy or just stretching the Chapters to make it more boring. .You will just forget about this info dumps like 3 chaps...aconsidering how unnecessary these feels like

    Ch 236 Chapter 235-Too Many Paths Of The Mind.
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    Heavenly Opposers
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  • Jheydi327
    Jheydi32710d
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    Alll this past 25 chapters seems to be more focused on info dumps.. It's too tiring,, even thought he won't use them for the time being.. Was this info dumps necessary??...

    Ch 235 Chapter 234-Guess Its Swords Then....?
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    Heavenly Opposers
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