Review Detail of Snoring_Panda in Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
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Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels. while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy. I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters. Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.
Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
Snoring_Panda
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I get that he if from the country side and has never played a cultivation game before so it makes sense that he starts out clueless. What does not make sense is his utter inability to learn. Even if he is new to the genre, after several months of playing he should understand the basics. He makes no attempt to learn from whats around hime or look at forums or ask questions to learn anything and stays the same naive idiot for a 1000 chapters. Isn't he in college. He acts like a 2nd grader. No, even a second grader would learn the game after playing as much as he does. He is a new born baby. At this point it just gets frustrating to read. Especially when the author said he would only be like that for 10 chapters. Also notice how the author does not respond to any comments about his stupidity but responds to every comment about if there will be romance or a harem. It is an easy fix too, so why as an author would you make your main character like this. ruining your own novel and for what.
I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
Ahiraf_Mirak:Is this a harem?
Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
honestly no idea. I am swamped with writing 5 chaps a day with the other 2 books. once I get a hang of the load and can write more, I will continue it. Didn't want it to go through an early phase of neglect like energy did.
_Tea_Lover_:Hey, off topic, but when's the next episode of ultimate monster evolution?
