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Sauce please ?
This and the previous paragraph feel a bit disconnected here, it like they are in the middle of doing something while sitting then suddenly she already move to the foor without clear indication here (I mean the impression and flow)
What the name of this old manga, btw ? it was fun to read but I forgot it
That show something about the mc not learning (despite it slap on his more than than one time) that even a supposed ancient goddess are more savvy than him…..
Her picture are literally above your guy comment there, btw
Really ? It fine to exaggerate and use cliche’, but it feel like you over exaggerate most of the time here (mostly the real life part of story) that end up make the story less good, so try to use them strategically, please (it like you made cheese cream on cake fo other, but if it like 90% cream and 10% cake, then have them every breakfast, lunch and dinner then they will get sick of it real quick even if they like cheese) Hope it give you idea for the possible problem, I will read to at least end of volume 1 then to see if those problem still there or not
Yeah, still have thing grind my gear with the fact she still ‘pure’ despite already have husband and got a daughter there, So there better a good reason in later chapter there
Unless there are like only less than 3 woman who try so far and not thought about it, it indeed weird
Then the reality of that japan society’s will disappoint him a lot
Where this character from, btw ?
So I guess they use the meat growed in lab type, which help reduce the prices and easier to access here ?, Because those salmon are quite expensive
How about the blade like the Tree heros in warhammer fantasy ?
At least those cooking do help extend the village life there, though you still have the point
That quite a lot. Btw I have a questions (just wondering), why chapter 22 look so messy despite your claim to already edit it ?? (though I hear that webnovel don't have edit option after you already release the chapter ?). And why not mention that in the start of chapter comment so to prevent all that messy drama with other new reader later ?
ah yeah, this would be more reasonable than making typical 'everyone are dumb except the mc' cliche